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Wayoutwalt's First Poetic Words (Drama) or na na na na hi hi bye bye

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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 06-01-2000 12:49 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt

ok well my first written work is lost (cry) but on tape in secret hidden archives are my first words and they were simplyly poetic  

Da da doo doo zippity zoo
Gaa gaa goo goo me better than you
Baa baa bye bye thptttttt
Naa naa hi hi zhptttttt




 in a canyon in a cavern excavatin for a mine
dwelt a miner forty niner and his daughter clemintine!!! yeehaw!
© Copyright 2000 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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1 posted 06-01-2000 01:50 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Geesh..What a genius you were at that age.  
Insightful poetry here...err..*GIGGLES*


 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


Kit McCallum
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2 posted 06-01-2000 05:37 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Bravo!  Now ... I've sent these off to the FBI decoding division so we can really understand you!  Good one WayOutWalt!

Best wishes,
/Kit
killer222
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3 posted 06-01-2000 08:54 AM       View Profile for killer222   Email killer222   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for killer222

Hey thats better than what I wrote this morning  

UTA


 "shun the frumious Bandersnatch!"
Killer222 :)

Corazon
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4 posted 06-01-2000 09:40 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

wow....the style....the form....this is incredible......how old did you say you were? a child genius!
rofg.....thanks for the smiles  
Poet deVine
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5 posted 06-01-2000 09:43 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Sounds like me snoring! (I snore in sonnets)..cute poem Walt.
TerryW
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6 posted 06-01-2000 10:57 AM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Walt~
     I can't stop laughing.  That is some of the best work I have ever read.  I know why you are so good now.....You got a very early start!


thptttttt!



Love Ya~

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
doreen peri
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7 posted 06-02-2000 12:01 AM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

one of the best FIRST poems ever!

nanny nanny boo boo! :P

i really love it!

how old were you when you wrote this? hehe

classic walt!
netswan
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8 posted 06-02-2000 03:37 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

way out  I am just speechless LOL
how do you know those were your first
wrods LOL???
mine were  BABA

~netswan
Nan
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9 posted 06-02-2000 07:24 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Geesh... You were easier to understand then...
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