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Kisses in the rain

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traveling heart
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0 posted 05-31-2000 10:56 PM       View Profile for traveling heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for traveling heart


Each day at work I take the moment
To walk and go right past you
I force myself, "Don't you look back..."
To not take in your view

It is hard to be around
Someone that makes your mind rave
Salvation in my imagination
Those moments I do save

I twist them around and I visit them again
It takes me from the mundane
Today we go and play hooky from work
And it begins to rain

Our clothes stick to us and it
Pours on us like a monsoon
You gaze beguilingly upon me
Our feelings & emotions in tune

Together we fall to the grass
And we become one under the oak tree
You see the thunder reflect in my eyes
And then you finally see me...

What a wonderful time for us both
Your kisses in the rain
Your touch electrifies me like thunder
Jolts without any pain

Only pleasure until...

I realize when I come back to earth
That my expression reveals it all
My desires cannot be erased from my face
As you stare at me in the hall

Perhaps you feel them too
Perhaps someday I will find
That we both look forward to
The next rainy day
And it won't have to be in my mind

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1 posted 05-31-2000 11:02 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

I like rainy days like that whether in my mind or for real.   Wonderful work here.  

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


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2 posted 05-31-2000 11:04 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Nice to have you here, Traveling Heart! Great poem, too--very sweet and full of longing.

Elizabeth


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3 posted 05-31-2000 11:16 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Traveling Heart,
                this is a beautiful poem, full of longing and dreams. . . hope that they come true. . .

Simply wonderful. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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4 posted 05-31-2000 11:29 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

oohhhh romantic!

 Kathleen
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