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rosepetals25
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0 posted 05-31-2000 10:38 PM       View Profile for rosepetals25   Email rosepetals25   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for rosepetals25

ANGEL

The whisper of your memory
Dances across my mind
Some people donít understand
How youíve touched my life
But you showed me more
Than other people ever could
You showed me hope
You showed me how to be brave
Smiling through your pain
Always offering a kind hand
Always offering words of care
Never complaining or faltering
I know you look down on us now
Not with sadness of being gone
But with peace and love
Watching over us
With the memory of you
Forever embedded in our hearts


© Copyright 2000 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 05-31-2000 10:50 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Rosepetals* Welcome to Passions!! You have made a beautiful entrance with this post, delicate and flowing from the heart.  Thank you for sharing it, I look forward to more in the future.
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 05-31-2000 10:58 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

First, let me say that I love rose petals, They adorn the entrance to my home and are laced thoughout my poems.
Second, your heart is revealed in your first poem and so I KNOW that I love rose petals
Third, Welcome to passions, rose petals
Liz
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Thank you for the warm welcome. I am still trying to figure all this out, so please be patient. I'm glad you liked my poem.  It was written for a very special friend that I met online.  She passed away about 2 months ago of cancer.  I was on my way to work the day after and was thinking of her. I jotted this down on a piece of scrap paper beore I went in.  It is one of my favorite poems.
Denise
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4 posted 06-01-2000 12:22 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Rosepetals! This is a lovely and touching tribute to your friend. I'm sure she'd love it. Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise
Kit McCallum
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5 posted 06-01-2000 07:06 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

What a touching and tender verse you've penned RosePetals.  Very lovely!  Welcome to Passions!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Nan
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Very nice, indeed... Welcome to Passions..
Cerenity
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7 posted 06-02-2000 08:42 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Rosepetals,

Wonderful first post and welcome to passions hope to see more of your work.

Love,  Cerenity
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