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Everything a Mom Could Want....
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Everything a Mom Could Want.... |
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angelsamongus Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 70New York 
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 She's everything a mom could want, everything and more. She's sunshine on the darkest day, she's mine to adore. She has gentle ways about her, but "tuff" she can be too! She makes me laugh and smile, she wipes away my blues. She tries to hard to be grown up, and keep up with the others. When she's sleepy, she goes and finds her mother. (me  )She says rock me please, "Butterfly Kisses" too! So in my arms I take her, and rock her to the tune. Before the rocking takes affect, she jumps up from my lap. She rushes to the potty, pulls down her "jammie flap" In my chair I await, her sweet return to me. When through the house a small voice shrieks!!WIPE MY BUTT, PLEASE! !~Lori~ |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
This is hilarious and so typical. I have one at my house, too, and he leads me on a merry chase! |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
This is so adorable! Loved the ending!! It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Lori* This is so precious...as is your little angel The ending...........priceless...lol |
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angelsamongus Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 70New York |
~Jana~ ~Tara~ & ~Butterflys~ I am so glad you enjoyed it.. LOL I have been wanting to write something about her and this is sooo HER! Kids.. gotta luv 'em! ~Lori~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
LOL! It started out serene, and then ended in reality. Loved this. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is delightful, Lori! She's beautiful, too! Denise |
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angelsamongus Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 70New York |
~Temptress~ and ~Denise~ So glad you enjoyed it.. She is my miracle baby, I love her with all my heart! ~Lori~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lori~ She is adorable ! What a miracle indeed. The poem is delightful. What a blessing ! LOVED THE POEM ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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angelsamongus Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 70New York |
~Marge~ Lauren is the caboose in our family, she has 6 older siblings on earth. She tries her best to keep up with them(mom is tuckered out!)and she is so independent! She makes my life very much an adventure! Thank you for the comments. ~Lori |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Lori Terrific poem - the reality of those last lines failed to dim the wonderful view of a mother and her daughter, snuggling together and sharing moments that last a lifetime, and are then passed on to the next little one. I could feel in every line the love you have for your little urchin. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
LOL LOL so cute, so clever hahah good old potty training days. Thankfully, they are long over. how well written! ~netswan |
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killer222 Junior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 48Northolt,Middlesex,England |
Wonderful, love the ending |
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