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Everything a Mom Could Want....

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angelsamongus
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0 posted 05-31-2000 08:10 PM       View Profile for angelsamongus   Email angelsamongus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit angelsamongus's Home Page   View IP for angelsamongus



She's everything a mom could want,
everything and more.
She's sunshine on the darkest day,
she's mine to adore.

She has gentle ways about her,
but "tuff" she can be too!
She makes me laugh and smile,
she wipes away my blues.

She tries to hard to be grown up,
and keep up with the others.
When she's sleepy,
she goes and finds her mother. (me  )

She says rock me please,
"Butterfly Kisses" too!
So in my arms I take her,
and rock her to the tune.

Before the rocking takes affect,
she jumps up from my lap.
She rushes to the potty,
pulls down her "jammie flap"

In my chair I await,
her sweet return to me.
When through the house a small voice

shrieks!!


WIPE MY BUTT, PLEASE!



!
~Lori~


© Copyright 2000 Lori Ayrault - All Rights Reserved
Jana Tovey
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1 posted 05-31-2000 08:42 PM       View Profile for Jana Tovey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jana Tovey

This is hilarious and so typical.  I have one at my house, too, and he leads me on a merry chase!
Tara Simms
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2 posted 05-31-2000 09:07 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

This is so adorable!  Loved the ending!!

 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley


Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 05-31-2000 09:59 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Lori*
This is so precious...as is your little angel   The ending...........priceless...lol  
angelsamongus
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4 posted 05-31-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for angelsamongus   Email angelsamongus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit angelsamongus's Home Page   View IP for angelsamongus

~Jana~
~Tara~
&
~Butterflys~
I am so glad you enjoyed it.. LOL I have been wanting to write something about her and this is sooo HER!
Kids.. gotta luv 'em!
~Lori~
Temptress
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5 posted 05-31-2000 11:21 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

LOL! It started out serene, and then ended in reality.   Loved this.

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


Denise
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6 posted 06-01-2000 12:25 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is delightful, Lori! She's beautiful, too!

Denise
angelsamongus
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~Temptress~ and ~Denise~
So glad you enjoyed it.. She is my miracle baby, I love her with all my heart!
~Lori~
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8 posted 06-01-2000 08:02 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lori~
She is adorable !
What a miracle indeed.
The poem is delightful.
What a blessing !
LOVED THE POEM !
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

angelsamongus
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9 posted 06-02-2000 08:08 AM       View Profile for angelsamongus   Email angelsamongus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit angelsamongus's Home Page   View IP for angelsamongus

~Marge~
Lauren is the caboose in our family, she has 6 older siblings on earth. She tries her best to keep up with them(mom is tuckered out!)and she is so independent! She makes my life very much an adventure!
Thank you for the comments.
~Lori
LngJhnAg
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10 posted 06-02-2000 08:16 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Lori

Terrific poem - the reality of those last lines failed to dim the wonderful view of a mother and her daughter, snuggling together and sharing moments that last a lifetime, and are then passed on to the next little one.  I could feel  in every line the love you have for your little urchin.
netswan
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11 posted 06-02-2000 08:18 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

LOL LOL  so cute, so clever hahah
good old potty training days.  Thankfully,
they are long over.

how well written!

~netswan
killer222
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Wonderful, love the ending  
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