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Master
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0 posted 05-31-2000 05:59 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

What muse could render me the verse
To catch and captivate your grace?
When all the muses stand submersed
In awe of you, -- thus I must praise
Your charm in silence! With affection,
My stunned bewildered stare receive.
Donít ask me to describe perfection,
My penís not worthy to conceive
The needed words. I dare not write--
To strive for the absurd intent
And miss the moment of delight
Of seeing you. Allow me then,
To simply watch with admiration,
And utter nothing in ovation.

© Copyright 2000 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Jana Tovey
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1 posted 05-31-2000 06:08 PM       View Profile for Jana Tovey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jana Tovey

Pretty high praise here.  Good poem.  I give it a standing ovation.
serenity blaze
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2 posted 05-31-2000 06:11 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

How I wish I'd written this....or better yet, inspired it....the servant bows to master...
Master
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3 posted 05-31-2000 09:07 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thank you both!
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4 posted 05-31-2000 09:10 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is excellent, Master. Quite a tribute....
Denise
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5 posted 05-31-2000 11:17 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Indeed! I think this is now my favorite of yours, Master!

Denise
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6 posted 05-31-2000 11:29 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Wow, I enjoyed this.   Short, but excellent.  

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


Master
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7 posted 06-01-2000 01:10 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thank you everyone,

To tell you the truth, I wasn't sure about this one, but after all of the responses I got I guess that it did come out good... Thanks
 
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