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The Essence of You

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Aimster
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0 posted 05-31-2000 05:27 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aimster

The Essence of You
Amy M. Kennedy

You revealed to me your heart
That's when this romance got its start
Flames of passion burning bright
An angels face came to me from within the light

Take my breath away, with your sweet kiss
Makes me feel nothing but sweet eternal bliss
In your arms forever I want to stay
Beside you in love is where my heart shall lay

Like a moth to the flame, I am consumed with desire
And my heart is full of love, and passion flares with fire
Doubt our love will ever fade or burn out
No in fact with you I'll always be...that there's no doubt

Like the mockingbird in the tree, your voice sings to me so sweet
I'll always cherish the summer nights and their intense heat
This is where we got our start, from here where we go I don't know
But I hope that our love always continues to grow


 
"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."



[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 05-31-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 05-31-2000 07:27 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

me thinks you got it BAAAAADDDD!!
and its soooo GOOOOOODDDD!!    
beautiful poem girl...passion filled
later-love-gator
jm

 There are places inside our souls ...
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts ...
that need to be loved this much.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

Irie
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2 posted 05-31-2000 07:36 PM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Hang on tight and don't let go!  
It's so wonderful to have someone special to love,
if we were ALL only so lucky!


 ~Sheri

[This message has been edited by Irie (edited 05-31-2000).]
Marina
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3 posted 05-31-2000 09:04 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Ok Amy.....Details????

Marina
Aimster
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4 posted 05-31-2000 09:58 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Thanks everyone for your wonderful responses as always much appreciated. Marina sorry hon no details can be revealed at this time. i'll just simply say this is a new love and quite fragile.

take care
amy  

p.s. Janet love ya girl!

 
"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

Butterflies_dont_cry
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5 posted 05-31-2000 10:07 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Amy*
This is magnificent!! The images and the message..breathtaking!!  And now the mystery....lol   Thank you for sharing this!!
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 05-31-2000 10:30 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Love those summer nights of intense heat
OK, we can wait for details.

You have written passion, my dear
Liz
CocoBaci
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7 posted 06-01-2000 02:30 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Oh Amy, this is beautifully expressed and written.
Coco
tracie66
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8 posted 06-01-2000 05:03 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Amy~
A new love how wonderful   may all your dreams and hopes come true and your hearts always be filled with tremendous love for each other.
Love Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe




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lorilockheart
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9 posted 06-01-2000 06:52 AM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

Amy, this is so sweet and romantic.  It's very refreshing.  Good job!

Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Kit McCallum
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10 posted 06-01-2000 07:00 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This just draws you in like the beginning of a wonderful love story should ... well done Amy!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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