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In the Light of Love Above.................Kit's Challenge
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In the Light of Love Above.................Kit's Challenge |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This one is the second poem I ever wrote. I post this one because I had recently reposted the first. In the Light of Love Above Flowers forever fragrant, dance in bloom When Heaven’s gate opens Birds beautiful harmony whistle their tune In the light of love above Hourglass of sand, no longer we will know In picturesque soft meadows of time Endless breezes of summer’s show In the light of love above Forever souls of destiny in sunsets blush Colours radiant rainbow in June Beats for eternity in hearts humble hush In the light of love above Marina Feb 16/2000 |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Breathtakingly beautiful!! I love the images and the flow, Thank you for sharing this!! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
the second one... wow...you were born to write poetry Marina. beautiful, Forever souls of destiny in sunsets blush Colours radiant rainbow in June Beats for eternity in hearts humble hush In the light of love above really loved the last verse. ------------------------ "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Will you accuse me as I hide Behind these layers of disguise And the mirrors of my own happiness.I've loved the freedom of being inside Need a new start and a different time Something grows in the space between me And it's twisting and changing this fragile body" -Nicky Wire |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hourglass of sand, no longer we will know In picturesque soft meadows of time Endless breezes of summer’s show In the light of love above ------------ WOWOWOWOW this is so lovely and so impressive for your early efforts... WHAT TOOK YA SO LONG  wondeful imagery girl!! beautiful poem, truly me thinks me needs to come to Canada, me thinks the view is much lovelier there... me and gemini will come play LOL later poet-gator jm There are places inside our souls ... that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts ... that need to be loved this much. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is an incredible poem Marina ... and I would never have known it was anyone's second attempt ... you were truly "born" a poet. The flow and imagery are absolutely wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful verse in the "early poems" challenge. Challenge exceeded Marina! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Butterflies, thank you Brian, you are very sweet. Thank you fot your compliment Jan, you get your butt up here girl! I am going to take you places where we can get the biggest....Ehem....excuse me...I forgot what forum I was in!!! Meet you in adult! Marina |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Kit, you snuck in there when I was replying. Thank you very much for your compliment. I am definitly not sure about "born" talent, but I am having fun writing. Marina |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very beautiful, Marina. Your word selection is excellent and it flows easily through the mind. I like it! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Excellent! And only written 3 months ago? An enjoyable read! Liz |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
See girl, I told you so wonderful poem, and only your second attempt? WOW All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Simply wonderful Marina. . . The light always shines. . . Excellent... ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh this has such a lovely flow to it  very tender and touching.Warms the heart  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Gets a "10" on my poetry rating scorecard! ~~nice writing~~ |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
A thank you to everyone. As most of you noticed I wrote this one 3 months ago so as you can see I am a "Newbie" at this poetry writing thing. Balladeer, thank you very much Liz,thanks, yes I confess i am new at this. jeff, thank you my friend. I can always count on you. Sven,thank you and I think you are right Tracie, thanks...glad you enjoyed it. Danny, you are so sweet! Thank you very much. Marina |
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