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Blowing Haiku

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her first summer sighs
dandelion fluff flies high
soft summer sun shines





 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 05-31-2000 10:31 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Haiku magic, Karilea....


regards, sudhir.

 Hey you, out there in the cold,
Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me?
Hey you, standing in the aisle,
With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me?
Hey you, don't help them to bury the light.
Don't give in without a fight.
Hey you, out there on your own,
Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me?
Hey you, with your ear against the wall,
Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me?
Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone?
Open your heart, I'm coming home....

by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall
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All in a day's enjoyment, Sudhir, thank you...
Marina
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Wonderful Haiku Sunshine!  Nicely done.

Marina
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This is beautiful, Sunshine!

Denise
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Marina, denise, thank you...

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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