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Life's clock

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Colin
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0 posted 05-31-2000 09:37 AM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Colin

Tick-tick tock-tock
tick-tick tock-tock
the hands of my watch
the hands of my clock
beating the seconds throughout the day
beating the time of our lives away.
Will you bring sorrow
or will you bring joy
for my far away girl
and her far away boy?

Eric.
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Poet deVine
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1 posted 05-31-2000 09:50 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Nice to 'read' you again Eric! I like this.. makes me think..time is too short to piddle it away!  
Maya the Brokenhearted
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2 posted 05-31-2000 12:14 PM       View Profile for Maya the Brokenhearted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Maya the Brokenhearted

what a nice fun poem, glad to see something so light in a world that is increasingly dark and murky
~M
Colin
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3 posted 06-01-2000 08:55 AM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

Thanks both for the kind replies   Yup, life's far too short to watch it pass you by!
Ohh and it was lovely to be welcomed back so warmly after my absence. Thankyou.
Eric.
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 06-01-2000 08:59 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

How sweet and rhytmic. I hope the faraway boy and faraway girl get to read this one.
Love
Liz
 
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