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Open Poetry #7

Life's clock

Colin
Senior Member

since 1999-06-05

Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England

0 posted 2000-05-31 09:37 AM

Tick-tick tock-tock
tick-tick tock-tock
the hands of my watch
the hands of my clock
beating the seconds throughout the day
beating the time of our lives away.
Will you bring sorrow
or will you bring joy
for my far away girl
and her far away boy?

Eric.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2000-05-31 09:50 AM

Nice to 'read' you again Eric! I like this.. makes me think..time is too short to piddle it away!

Maya the Brokenhearted
Member

since 2000-02-13

Posts 66

2 posted 2000-05-31 12:14 PM

what a nice fun poem, glad to see something so light in a world that is increasingly dark and murky
~M

Colin
Senior Member

since 1999-06-05

Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England

3 posted 2000-06-01 08:55 AM

Thanks both for the kind replies

Yup, life's far too short to watch it pass you by!
Ohh and it was lovely to be welcomed back so warmly after my absence. Thankyou.
Eric.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2000-06-01 08:59 AM

How sweet and rhytmic. I hope the faraway boy and faraway girl get to read this one.
Love
Liz

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