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serenity blaze
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0 posted 05-31-2000 08:48 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

You have not
been loved like this--
delete the "I"
from midst of bliss...
remove you
thoughts
of ownership...
and the essence
serpentine
that ever
would I
call you mine--
a blur to dream,
so sweet,
sublime-
no, you have not
been loved like this....
© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 05-31-2000 09:52 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Bliss is what Hoot has now...wish I could find it.. good poem!  
Janet Marie
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2 posted 05-31-2000 10:09 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

You have not
been loved like this--
delete the "I"
from midst of bliss...
-----------
that ever
would I
call you mine--
a blur to dream,
so sweet,
sublime-
no, you have not
been loved like this....
-----------

exquisite, perfect,
i love this poem girl!!
its SO YOU!!!
like a kiss from those sweet lips.
no...he has NOT been loved like this...
excellent me twin...me bows before you...
holding up those mirrors ...
later sweet-gator


 There are places inside our souls ...
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts ...
that need to be loved this much.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

Sudhir Iyer
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium


3 posted 05-31-2000 10:13 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

In a place of serenity one will find bliss...

This one is nicely written... Serenity

a blur to dream,
so sweet ...


Regards, sudhir

 Hey you, out there in the cold,
Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me?
Hey you, standing in the aisle,
With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me?
Hey you, don't help them to bury the light.
Don't give in without a fight.
Hey you, out there on your own,
Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me?
Hey you, with your ear against the wall,
Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me?
Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone?
Open your heart, I'm coming home....

by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall
Aimster
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since 02-19-2000
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4 posted 05-31-2000 11:09 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

I liked this one A LOT!!! Me thinks your poetry is pretty darn cool. This piece held such a sweet honesty about it. Thanks for posting it!

take care,
amy  

 
"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

Parker
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Posts 3135
... the old black rum


5 posted 05-31-2000 02:15 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

serenity, I loved it, I wish I was loved like that. Maybe once, but I thought it was just lust...  

Great peom

Parker
serenity blaze
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6 posted 05-31-2000 02:48 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Poet deVine---thank you, and I am happy for
              Hoot too!

Janet Marie---my sweetest cheerleader! thank
              you much--I'll e ya later! (My
              depression lifted after the
              'lemon tree' incident--laughed
              all night..."He" is now total
              convinced I'm nuts...)

Sudhir--------what a lovely compliment, I
              enjoy yur work as well...

Aimster-------cool is good--I like cool-ty.

Parker--------You bring up an interesting
              point, but I suspect you often
              bring up SOMETHING interesting.
              and fret not...I love ya!!!

Thanks to all once again...
brian madden
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since 05-06-2000
Posts 4532
ireland


7 posted 05-31-2000 04:04 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

remove you
thoughts
of ownership...
and the essence
serpentine
that ever
would I
call you mine--

WOw I love that image,
beautiful, I felt bliss before once or twice but it wasn't as wonderful as what you described so maybe I am mistaken. lovely poem.  

 ------------------------
"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Will you accuse me as I hide Behind these layers of disguise And the mirrors of my own happiness.I've loved the freedom of being inside
Need a new start and a different time
Something grows in the space between me
And it's twisting and changing this fragile body" -Nicky Wire


serenity blaze
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8 posted 05-31-2000 05:52 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Thank you so much brian---but must confess--the inspiration is too sweet...and by the way, if you have felt bliss--then you have had bliss...and a blessing it is, ain't it?
spiked
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since 01-13-2000
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9 posted 05-31-2000 07:00 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

A pleasant surprise to see this side of you.
You see so much better through the eyes of a face with a smile on it.
Very nice Serenity.
simply poetic
Rich
serenity blaze
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10 posted 06-01-2000 02:14 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Thank you, Rich---there are other sides to me yet---not sure if I am multi-faceted personality--or a multi-personalitied faucet...either way, hope it continues to be a pleasant surprise...ah ha ha ha ha.....  
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


11 posted 06-01-2000 02:25 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This is a really sweet and pretty love poem...I have to say: Awesome!!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
 
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