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~Safe N Sound~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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Catch me when I fall before I crash to the ground Catch me when I call to you, tell me I'm safe and sound Hold me in your arms never letting go Rock me slow and tender, rock me to and fro Keep me safe and secure, wrap me up real tight Keep me safe and sound until the morning light Comfort me with tender soothing words that only you can say To keep me safe in your arms tonight, is what I quietly pray Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
So tender and sweet ... flows like a lullabye Tracie ... lovely poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Kit~ Always a lovely comment you have  thanksHope I didn't put you to sleep....lol Tracie~< !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 05-31-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Tracie~ Rocked in the cradle of love ... you little romantic, you ! I like this muse ... keep her. Enjoyed hearing your heart song. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ Yep she is a little romantic trouble is I can't keep her home long enough to settle down and write some more, she's off right now swooning someone else  DARN IT!!!thanks Marge see ya  Luv Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
tracie this one is great..like a sweet sung lullaby. calming and serene thoughts *sigh* *smile* jm There are places inside our souls ... that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts ... that need to be loved this much. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
tracie- excellent! while reading this i was left with a serene calm feeling like i was floating in the air. you expressed your feelings quite well in this one! take care. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is written with such longing and grace, a beautiful read Tracie! Thank you for sharing this. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
jm~ Always appreciate your comments..thanks Oh and thanks for the tracie~ Sweet Amy so glad you liked. TaTracie~ Butterflies~ glad you liked this also thanksTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~nice writing tracie~~ the comments by others are echoed by me. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Tracie~ It is like a lullabye! This is so beautiful.......What lovely thoughts. Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
tracie, a well sung lullabye...lovely. ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi Danny Thanks for the echoes  Terry~ and Lorraine~ Thanks for you lovely comments Hope I didn't put you both to sleep with my lullabye Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
What a sweet and tranquil read. Enjoyed this one very much. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Eloise Thankyou hon Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Tracie66; Sounds like a hit record to me. This could be spiritual or "a little bit country sound", really beautiful. marcy |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marcy~ Hi First time that has been said to me, thanks hon Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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