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~Safe N Sound~

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tracie66
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0 posted 05-31-2000 05:48 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66


Catch me when I fall before I crash to the ground
Catch me when I call to you, tell me I'm safe and sound

Hold me in your arms never letting go
Rock me slow and tender, rock me to and fro

Keep me safe and secure, wrap me up real tight
Keep me safe and sound until the morning light

Comfort me with tender soothing words that only you can say
To keep me safe in your arms tonight, is what I quietly pray


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 05-31-2000 05:52 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

So tender and sweet ... flows like a lullabye Tracie ... lovely poem!

Best wishes,
/Kit
tracie66
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Kit~
Always a lovely comment you have   thanks
Hope I didn't put you to sleep....lol
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe




[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 05-31-2000).]
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3 posted 05-31-2000 06:48 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, Tracie~
Rocked in the cradle of love ...
you little romantic, you !
I like this muse ... keep her.
Enjoyed hearing your heart song.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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tracie66
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4 posted 05-31-2000 07:26 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Marge~
Yep she is a little romantic trouble is I can't keep her home long enough to settle down and write some more, she's off right now swooning someone else   DARN IT!!!
thanks Marge
see ya  
Luv Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Janet Marie
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5 posted 05-31-2000 04:13 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

tracie
this one is great..like a sweet sung lullaby.
calming and serene thoughts
*sigh* *smile*
jm

 There are places inside our souls ...
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts ...
that need to be loved this much.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

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6 posted 05-31-2000 04:23 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

tracie-

excellent! while reading this i was left with a serene calm feeling like i was floating in the air. you expressed your feelings quite well in this one!

take care.
amy  

 
"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

Butterflies_dont_cry
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7 posted 05-31-2000 04:28 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

This is written with such longing and grace, a beautiful read Tracie! Thank you for sharing this.
tracie66
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jm~
Always appreciate your comments..thanks Oh and thanks for the  
tracie~

Sweet Amy   so glad you liked. Ta
Tracie~

Butterflies~
glad you liked this also   thanks
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Danny Holloway
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9 posted 06-01-2000 11:12 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

~~nice writing tracie~~ the comments by others are echoed by me.
TerryW
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Tracie~
     It is like a lullabye!  This is so beautiful.......What lovely thoughts.




Love Ya~

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
Lorraine Nisbet
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tracie,

a well sung lullabye...lovely.

~Lorraine

 
A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur

tracie66
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Hi Danny  
Thanks for the echoes  

Terry~ and Lorraine~
Thanks for you lovely comments  
Hope I didn't put you both to sleep with my lullabye  



 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Eloise
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What a sweet and tranquil read.  Enjoyed this one very much.  
tracie66
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Eloise
Thankyou hon  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Alle'cram
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15 posted 06-03-2000 10:12 PM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

Tracie66; Sounds like a hit record to me. This could be spiritual or "a little bit country sound", really beautiful. marcy
tracie66
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Marcy~
Hi  
First time that has been said to me, thanks hon
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


 
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