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~Sweet Surrender~

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Janet Marie
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0 posted 05-31-2000 01:35 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Janet Marie

His words dance and rise with grace upon the page,
beckoning to my heart ... his invitation for desires to engage.
His rhymes enchant me ... their promises to entice and linger,
his verses entwine golden rings of love gently thru my fingers.

I long to see love through his poetic, gifted, eyes,
to share his vision, his dreams, to then see where my future lies.
To know his secrets, to touch the core of his soul's essence,
to be consumed and contented by the grace of his presence.

Just to know the gifts of his passion's pleasures,
to touch, to taste, to discover his sensual treasures.
Should fate grant this chance ... his every fantasy I wish to fulfill,
would my dreams come true as this desire overtakes my will.

By his every word conceived ... I am captivated,
Transfixed on his offerings ... I am fascinated.
Baptize me in the sweet depths of his poetic cascade,
I surrender to the temptations as all my resistance fades.


Janet Marie




 There are places inside our souls ...
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts ...
that need to be loved this much.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

© Copyright 2000 Janet Marie - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 05-31-2000 01:39 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

JanetMarie~
I baptise thee ...
Well, dunk you in the baptismal waters of Poetic Lust !

*On a more serious note ...
nicely done, fair friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 05-31-2000 01:48 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Oh, Janet Marie, this is by far the nicest poem anyone has ever written about me! I am truly grateful and will always...huh?...it's not?.....er, well, it's still a wonderful poem!
Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 05-31-2000 06:06 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

WOW!!!! Baptize me in the sweet depths of his poetic cascade,
I surrender to the temptations as all my resistance fades.

Excellent lines!!  How true how true....ahhhhhhh!!!  The words of poetry melt even the coldest heart...forget the dimonds and flowers....send me poetry from you heart!!
tracie66
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4 posted 05-31-2000 06:10 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Janet~
This was such a love swept poem which just made me melt when I read.
Very dreamy in deed.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Kit McCallum
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5 posted 05-31-2000 06:12 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Oh Janet Marie ... extremely well done, loved your wording, especially the last two lines. Wonderful!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Alle'cram
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6 posted 05-31-2000 08:05 AM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

now,now Janet Marie, try to let your emotions out. (chuckle). Come on over to Spirituals for a dunkin', then you can be on your way; (This was said in a spirit of fun)
Great job,
Marcy
Severn
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7 posted 05-31-2000 08:14 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Fellow butterfly girl: what are lovely writer you are...

beautiful!

(And ignore Balladeer... )

K
lorilockheart
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8 posted 05-31-2000 08:20 AM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

J. Marie,

Oh, how "passionate"!  I don't think I've seen this side of you, but it is definitely not disappointing.  Everything you write just grabs hold of me girl!  When I logged on this morning I was so happy to see you posted at the very top - right where you belong!  

Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Poet deVine
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9 posted 05-31-2000 10:03 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I love it! Those poetic men sure can turn on the charm can't they (Balladeer included). Perhaps poetic men are more in touch with feelings and that makes us want to surrender to their poetic charms.  
Sudhir Iyer
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10 posted 05-31-2000 10:16 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

A CLASSIC!!!!

The poet must be a real lucky one to have such a feeling developed in another heart...

Great work, Janet...

Regards, sudhir

 Hey you, out there in the cold,
Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me?
Hey you, standing in the aisle,
With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me?
Hey you, don't help them to bury the light.
Don't give in without a fight.
Hey you, out there on your own,
Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me?
Hey you, with your ear against the wall,
Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me?
Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone?
Open your heart, I'm coming home....

by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall
Corinne
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11 posted 05-31-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Lovely, I hope he hears you loud and clear, Janet Marie!

That Balladeer, what a card, eh?

Corinne
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12 posted 05-31-2000 11:17 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

jan--

wow!!! you went way deep with this one! i like, i like a lot lol. full of intense powerful emotion served janet style. you always seem to make me smile...thank you. really loved this poem, quite beautiful!

love ya,
amy  

 
"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

Janet Marie
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13 posted 05-31-2000 07:55 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

margie...LOL...YES INDEED -- LUST!!!  
LoL TY for the read.

Balladeer ... sshhhhh...now dont give away all my secrets ...LOL
Lets keep them guessing. TY  

Butterfly ...yes gifts of poetry are the best...But diamonds run a close second LOL TY my SS

Tracie ... TY hon, you always say the peferfect thing...glad I could melt ya LOL

Kit ...TY for such a wondeful reply and always reading my work.

Alle'  LOL and TY...it was taken in the same spirit given!!

Sev(butterfly sharer) ...TY for the read and lovely..but who could ignore sweet balladeer LOL

Lori ...this side of me sneaks out every so often ... I gotta  let her out so she can heat up and then cool off   lol
TY for such kind complimenys my friend...enjoy your trip.

Poet D ...YES..EXACTLY... love those romantic poets.

Sud, .. thank you sir... me thinks Im the lucky one...

Corinne, if he dont  I GIVE UP ...LOL TY

Amy..my one woman cheerleading section...
TY for the smiles you send my way as well.

THANK YOU ALL for the kind replies.
jm
Marina
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14 posted 05-31-2000 09:06 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Jan-gator...this is really cool writing.  Such passion and baptising all going on!

Marina
Lone Wolf
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15 posted 05-31-2000 10:29 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

I am ready!!!  Me next!!  Janet, this was fabulous lusty writing!!!  Great read!!  Keep up the great work!  

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Elizabeth Santos
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16 posted 05-31-2000 10:36 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Margie, don't ya love it?
Some great lines in this lusty piece
Wow!
Liz
 
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