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When Will I

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traveling heart
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0 posted 05-31-2000 01:26 AM       View Profile for traveling heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for traveling heart

When Will I...

Sleep Again
Fully and Deeply
With my
Lovers arms around me
With dreams of Happier Days
Yet to come...

When Will I...

Fall in love again
I must admit
My heart feels such pain
at my choices in relationships
They are a loss and no gain
I realy wonder sometimes
Has the world gone insane?

When Will I...

Discover my dreams
Way out as they are...
And give myself a chance
Perhaps I'll go far

When Will I Do These Things?

First get some sleep
And quit dating creeps
Sort out the dreams and develop some schemes
Perhaps find a quiet field
And let out a shout
Cut myself some slack,
Eventually I will figure it out

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spiked
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Hammond, La USA


1 posted 05-31-2000 03:42 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Your dreams will come true when you expect it least. Give yourself the slack you talk of and everything else should take care of itself.
Love usually finds you
not the reverse
Great poem
I like Much
traveling heart
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2 posted 05-31-2000 08:15 PM       View Profile for traveling heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for traveling heart

Thanks Spiked...

I believe you must be a kindred spirit based on the time that you posted your reply... up into the wee hours of the morning - weren't we!!! I appreciate your critique and your advice  )

Traveling Heart
 
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