navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #7 » oh hi, welcome back
Open Poetry #7
Post A Reply Post New Topic oh hi, welcome back Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
slipknot
Junior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 25


0 posted 2000-05-31 01:07 AM


you left my life
not to be seen
forever gone
my life wiped clean
time moves on
and so did I
I got myself in order
started to fly
but I should have known
that soon I would cry
you came back home from school
we hung out again
then all the old feelings
start rushing in
what do I do
you got a new man
I'll just suck it up and deal
like everything in my life
hell, gimme a beer
no more pain I feel

© Copyright 2000 slipknot - All Rights Reserved
Jeffrey Carter
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!
1 posted 2000-05-31 01:14 AM


Welcome to :P

Great first post....keep 'em coming  

 All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep



JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-05-31 04:51 PM


Wonderful expression of your feelings.  James
Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
3 posted 2000-05-31 05:02 PM


Welcome to Passions!!  
The title had me thinking in one direction but then after reading I reminded myself to let the poem not the title send the message.  This is an great entrance with strong emotion, thank you for sharing this.

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #7 » oh hi, welcome back

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary