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slipknot
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you left my life
not to be seen
forever gone
my life wiped clean
time moves on
and so did I
I got myself in order
started to fly
but I should have known
that soon I would cry
you came back home from school
we hung out again
then all the old feelings
start rushing in
what do I do
you got a new man
I'll just suck it up and deal
like everything in my life
hell, gimme a beer
no more pain I feel
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1 posted 05-31-2000 01:14 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Welcome to :P

Great first post....keep 'em coming  

 All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep


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Wonderful expression of your feelings.  James
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Welcome to Passions!!  
The title had me thinking in one direction but then after reading I reminded myself to let the poem not the title send the message.  This is an great entrance with strong emotion, thank you for sharing this.
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