Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
I'm sorry, sweetea, but consider yourself judged. I have received comments that the poem goes too far for the Open Forum which many families and children visit every day. I am temporarily moving the poem to the Moderator's Forum where a decision will be reached. The writing is excellent and was done with style. There is certainly no complaint there but the Open Forum may not be the appropriate place for these images. I hope you understand. I would want to do nothing to discourage a poet with your obvious talent from further postings.