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sweetea
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0 posted 05-30-2000 10:44 PM       View Profile for sweetea   Email sweetea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sweetea

This poem is now available in the Adult Forum

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 05-31-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 sweetea - All Rights Reserved
Kevin
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1 posted 05-30-2000 11:06 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

Im sitting here speachless,

i swear with all my heart that this has been my fantasy for the longest time....

and ive told others that can back me up

and you just matched it with words perfectly

nice entrance
spiked
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2 posted 05-30-2000 11:21 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Making love in the rain does lend itself into a very erotic fantasy.
keep your eyes on the weather
and set this fantasy free.
Rich



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sweetea
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3 posted 05-30-2000 11:38 PM       View Profile for sweetea   Email sweetea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sweetea

Thank you Kevin and Spiked for your responses.  This is my first attempt at poetry and I was scared to death to submit this and even more terrified to read the replies.  I closed my eyes and wrote the words that best described exactly how I pictured this fantasy.  I feared it may be a little too explicit after reading the poetry at this sight and am thankful no one has judged me.  Thanks again!
Balladeer
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4 posted 05-30-2000 11:56 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I'm sorry, sweetea, but consider yourself judged. I have received comments that the poem goes too far for the Open Forum which many families and children visit every day. I am temporarily moving the poem to the Moderator's Forum where a decision will be reached. The writing is excellent and was done with style. There is certainly no complaint there but the Open Forum may not be the appropriate place for these images. I hope you understand. I would want to do nothing to discourage a poet with your obvious talent from further postings.
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5 posted 05-31-2000 08:54 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Thank you, sweetea, for your understanding.
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