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Where Twilight Touches Dreams

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Brandyn Sand
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0 posted 05-30-2000 08:52 PM       View Profile for Brandyn Sand   Email Brandyn Sand   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Brandyn Sand's Home Page   View IP for Brandyn Sand

I met you in the darkness
Where twilight touches dreams,
In a place where love existed
As silent sunlit beams.

You were arrayed in midnight;
I was clad in shadows fair.
And only love surrounded us,
For no one else was there.

As your flesh pressed against me,
In the warmth of your embrace,
A "oneness" seized my memory
That time will not erase.

And I strive on until the day
This love will set me free,
When dreams are turned reality
And you are here with me.



 
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1 posted 05-30-2000 09:07 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Brandyn~
This is simply lusciously tender.
The title grabbed my romantic nature ...
and the content did not let me down.
Wonderful, gentle writing.
~*Marge*~


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Irish Rose
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2 posted 05-31-2000 07:10 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

I can't believe this didn't have a hundred replies, it speaks to my heart, it's one I can and will read over and over again....

 Kathleen
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Kit McCallum
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3 posted 05-31-2000 07:14 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

I'm glad I didn't miss this one Brandyn! You've expressed this beautifully ... its truly lovely and flows with such gentle romance, wonderful!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Cerenity
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4 posted 06-01-2000 08:33 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Brandyn,

This is so beautiful, what a wonderful dream to have. Enjoyed very much, thank you for sharing.

Love,  Cerenity
angelsamongus
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5 posted 06-01-2000 08:46 AM       View Profile for angelsamongus   Email angelsamongus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit angelsamongus's Home Page   View IP for angelsamongus

~Brandyn~
What a beautiful flowing poem, you have a wonderful way with words. I love the title.
~Lori~
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6 posted 06-01-2000 12:38 PM       View Profile for MyPenNameIsSam   Email MyPenNameIsSam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MyPenNameIsSam

This is beautiful...

 Fleeting World
"Thus shall ye think of all this fleeting world:
A star at dawn, a bubble in a stream;
A flash of lightning in a summer cloud,
A flickering lamp, a phantom, and a dream."
-from the Diamond Sutra, translated by : A. F. Price -- found in Teachings of The Buddha, edited by Jack Kornfield


Butterflies_dont_cry
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7 posted 06-01-2000 01:00 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

The title drew me in and the poem carried me off, this is tenderly romantic with wisps of longing and need.  You wove a beautiful piece, thank you for sharing it.
Sunshine
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8 posted 06-01-2000 02:34 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

This is extremely romantic and will most like melt every woman's heart that should ever read it!  Well done!
Martie
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9 posted 06-01-2000 02:37 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

What a lovely title...and the whole poem is beautifully romantic.  Wonderful writing!
ESP
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10 posted 06-01-2000 03:05 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Gorgeous title!!! And a very lovely, romantic poem too!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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