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JOY 14
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If you feel you can get rid of me
by pushing me aside
Walking over my heart,
Crushing my pride,
Then you are dreadfuly mistaken
Wrong as rain that stings your scalp
Poison drops
That somehow found their way to your mouth
All you are made up of now is poison rain
That you try to shake off on me
I won't have it
I won't have your green stemed drops of hate
That want to win back my love that's
Already streamed through the flood gates..
Floated past the asters,
the gem stone,
the glass slippers cutting slice,
the shattered serving plate
It's time to stop reaching
It's time these waters seperate.
© Copyright 2000 Kristen Joy Jacobus - All Rights Reserved
Jana Tovey
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Sounds like an "Amen" to me!  Determined analysis is GOOD for our souls.
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Joy~
Sounds like 'moving on' is in action.
Quite emphatically written.
~*Marge*~


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Joy,

Great piece.  I relate to those feeling well.  Leeting go is the hardest part I think....taking that first step.  Good luck to you on your journey.  I hope that happiness awaits you at the end.  

LW


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