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~ Treasured Desire ~

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CocoBaci
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0 posted 05-30-2000 02:42 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CocoBaci

We hear so much of a love on line I felt this verse has a cute lil rhyme
So here I dare I give it a whirl a lil rhyme to share with the world!

~ Treasured Desire ~
A switch is clicked a screen lights up
  Entering their cyber world they hook up
Words are exchanged and written on screen
   Feelings and passion shared by two unique beings
Distance between them and miles they are apart
   Beating hearts is all these two have found
I love you's, I need you's and I want you's
   Expressed so eloquently
A romance a bliss shared by two unique beings
   Never before have they snared a lovers kiss
Still they feel its passion and tenderness
   Destiny it was when they first met
She removed the chills from beneath his sweat
   Wrapping her heart around his own
Never again do two unique beings feel alone
   In their world they are each other's dreams
Bringing to life their innermost feelings
   Fantasies ablaze with their passionate fires
A one of a kind frienship a treasured desire.
Coco  


© Copyright 2000 CocoBaci - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 05-30-2000 03:19 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

i like this lots its the story of me and my wife as well...how do you pronounce the second part of your name and what does the name mean cuz i love it alot i go around sayin coco baci coco baci
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2 posted 05-30-2000 03:29 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Does this actually happen? LOL  Good poem!! And please answer Walt, he's driving us nuts singing cocobaci..
CocoBaci
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3 posted 05-30-2000 04:57 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

PDV - thank you for your kind words I'll try to settle down Walt from singing those words

Walt - I can't stop the giggling from the comments you write here's the answer to what has you chanting about ..

Coco .. chocolate
Baci .. kisses  (prounced as Bah-chee)
brian madden
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4 posted 05-30-2000 05:07 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

a wonderful poem Cocobaci, lovely rhyme,
I though that in my rhyme I might reply
it is just I am not very good at it.
a loevely poem.


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"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Will you accuse me as I hide Behind these layers of disguise And the mirrors of my own happiness.I've loved the freedom of being inside
Need a new start and a different time
Something grows in the space between me
And it's twisting and changing this fragile body" -Nicky Wire


CocoBaci
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5 posted 05-30-2000 06:21 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Brian, your comments are so sweet!

Coco
Jana Tovey
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6 posted 05-30-2000 08:46 PM       View Profile for Jana Tovey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jana Tovey

Eloquently put.  Love always finds a way, or a line, or an internet server...oops!
Holly
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7 posted 05-30-2000 08:52 PM       View Profile for Holly   Email Holly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Holly's Home Page   View IP for Holly

Oh how these words ring so true in this poem! For anyone that has been captivated by someone they "met" online knows this all too well...oh, not that I would know any of this personally. LOL  
peace & all,
-Holly


 I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.
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8 posted 05-30-2000 10:01 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Excellent Coco,
               this has been true for some friends of mine. . . and you have captured the feelings here quite well.

Wonderful poem!!

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--Victor Frankl

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