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No Letter E ....H-LP!
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No Letter E ....H-LP! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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What Will You Say What will you say, if I ask you to stay With no word of loyalty just for a day Sit down on my pillow, sing songs to a star And strum wondrous music upon your guitar I’ll watch you and sway to your soft lyric word To rhythms of wind and a small mocking bird I’ll nourish your spirit, I’ll comfort your mind And you’ll not want to go from this calm you will find What will you say, if I ask you to stay And bask in a fountain of bliss for a day Elizabeth Santos |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I'd say YES! Nice work, Elizabeth--very peaceful. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
mmmmmmm very nice, very well done.....I had thought of trying this one, but haven't been inspired or had the time.....I love the way you handled the challenge  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Liz~ This is just a wondrous work from you. I wouldn't want to say NO .. but I could not say anything with that awful 'unsaid ' thing in it ... so will say, No Thanks ! But thanks for asking ! *Grinning* at you ! Ah-ha ! ~*Willow*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
do i have to give my answer right now, can I get back to you on it. For such a difficult challenge you made it appear easy. A wonderful response to the challenge, a lovely poem. I’ll watch you and sway to your soft lyric word To rhythms of wind and a small mocking bird ------------------------ "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Will you accuse me as I hide Behind these layers of disguise And the mirrors of my own happiness.I've loved the freedom of being inside Need a new start and a different time Something grows in the space between me And it's twisting and changing this fragile body" -Nicky Wire |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am always in awe of how your handle every challenge, Elizabeth, my friend. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
How very beautiful and wistfull....touched my heart, it did. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
its cool that if yuh never had said no e i woulda never noticed..the challenge was that well met |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful as always...and no letter 'e'..amazing.. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
The true mark of talent is the ease with which it is displayed. Liz, you have talent. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I'd say yes as well Liz..  HUSG |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, I was going to answer yes or certainly or of course or sure or absolutely but since they all contain an "e" I'll just say "You got it, pilgrim!" |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely poem, Liz! Just one thing, I would have signed it "Liz" instead of "ElizabEeth," ya know? LOL Corinne |
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