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No Letter E ....H-LP!

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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 05-30-2000 01:10 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

What Will You Say

What will you say, if I ask you to stay
With no word of loyalty just for a day
Sit down on my pillow, sing songs to a star
And strum wondrous music upon your guitar

I値l watch you and sway to your soft lyric word
To rhythms of wind and a small mocking bird
I値l nourish your spirit,  I値l comfort your mind
And you値l not want to go from this calm you will find

What will you say, if I ask you to stay
And bask in a fountain of bliss for a day

Elizabeth Santos
© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-30-2000 01:17 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I'd say YES! Nice work, Elizabeth--very peaceful.

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

Corazon
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2 posted 05-30-2000 01:39 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

mmmmmmm very nice, very well done.....I had thought of trying this one, but haven't been inspired or had the time.....I love the way you handled the challenge  
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3 posted 05-30-2000 01:51 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Liz~
This is just a wondrous work from you.
I wouldn't want to say NO ..
but I could not say anything with that
awful 'unsaid ' thing in it ...
so will say, No Thanks !
But thanks for asking !
*Grinning* at you !
Ah-ha !
~*Willow*~


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brian madden
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4 posted 05-30-2000 01:55 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

do i have to give my answer right now, can I get back to you on it.

For such a difficult challenge you made it appear easy. A wonderful response to the challenge, a lovely poem.  

I値l watch you and sway to your soft lyric word
To rhythms of wind and a small mocking bird


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"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Will you accuse me as I hide Behind these layers of disguise And the mirrors of my own happiness.I've loved the freedom of being inside
Need a new start and a different time
Something grows in the space between me
And it's twisting and changing this fragile body" -Nicky Wire


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


5 posted 05-30-2000 01:59 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I am always in awe of how your handle every challenge, Elizabeth, my friend.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Martie
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6 posted 05-30-2000 03:28 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

How very beautiful and wistfull....touched my heart, it did.  
wayoutwalt
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7 posted 05-30-2000 03:30 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

its cool that if yuh never had said no e i woulda never noticed..the challenge was that well met
Poet deVine
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8 posted 05-30-2000 03:32 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Beautiful as always...and no letter 'e'..amazing..
LngJhnAg
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9 posted 05-30-2000 03:34 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

The true mark of talent is the ease with which it is displayed.  Liz, you have talent.
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10 posted 05-30-2000 04:36 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I'd say yes as well Liz..

HUSG
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11 posted 05-30-2000 06:08 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, I was going to answer yes or certainly or of course or sure or absolutely but since they all contain an "e" I'll just say "You got it, pilgrim!"
Corinne
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12 posted 05-30-2000 08:40 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Lovely poem, Liz!  Just one thing, I would have signed it "Liz" instead of "ElizabEeth,"
ya know?

LOL

Corinne
 
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