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Oh what are yuh afraid of yuh ninny

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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 05-30-2000 08:16 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt

I have composed a triumphant letter
Though when I go to send I think better
Without pause in shame I smack delete
One more time my shyness doth defeat

There's a scary man I'd like to drop a line
And ask him to hear what is on my mind
He's not the boogie monster man from lore
Sometimes I wonder what I'm scaredy for

My peers have told me simply just e-mail
Direct to the point and man I cannot fail
And wayoutwalt we know you're way out, friend
Keep in mind known English 'fore you go to send

That kinda made me puff out my pouty lips
I'm sure I can write without my way-out quips
Just no yuhs no yuhs and I'll do well
I guess no yuhs and my story I can tell

For the last time the last time I'll be told
E-mail the man he has a heart of gold
Don't hesitate he is great you mustn't pause
Ask your question to the wizard of our oz

I followed the yellow brick road all alone
The one where good intentions are paved in stone
And though my words were flowery swirled
They were off to the magic capital of the world

When they were read and when they were studied
The eyes of the reader must been muddied
Because to him they made since very well
The day I first contacted Ron Carnell




 in a canyon in a cavern excavatin for a mine
dwelt a miner forty niner and his daughter clemintine!!! yeehaw!
© Copyright 2000 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
lucky
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1 posted 05-30-2000 09:10 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Now,

if I may (only concerning the title) as my daughter would say, "duh..?" but I'm glad I took the time to bother. By the way, do you remember the 60's..? Man, I sure wanted to give a lot of them a free piece of my heart as Janis would say. Well, Yuh's put it... Yuh, good..! Oh, by the way I'm not real clear on this "Capital" thing... and who exactly is Carnell..?

Lucky
Denise
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2 posted 05-30-2000 10:06 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Delightful, Walt!  

Denise
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3 posted 05-30-2000 10:20 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, Ron has always been good at spotting diamonds in the rough and you got the market cornered on rough, Walt, and fortunately for all of us that know ya, you've got a lot of gems in there, too. Somehow the old Pounderosa wouldn't be the same without ya!
devina
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4 posted 05-30-2000 10:53 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Scince you've posted already...I won't lecture you about how cute this is!!!   Simply YOU is all I can say Walt...and it's wonderful!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Poet deVine
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5 posted 05-30-2000 11:31 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Yuh scared ninny! Walt you make me laugh! This is really good...so did you send it? Did you get a reply?  
wayoutwalt
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6 posted 05-30-2000 11:35 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

oh nooo not yet this is one of those fantasy poems yuh all true but the happy ending  
LngJhnAg
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7 posted 05-30-2000 11:56 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Walt - you are definitely Way Out - lol - great lines - I was laughing as I read it - you've got a slant on life that is totally YOU.
wayoutwalt
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8 posted 05-30-2000 04:17 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

i did it i did it and lucky ron carnell created this site and he lives in the magic cap of the world yuh yuh and he is no meanie!!
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9 posted 05-31-2000 01:00 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Walt~
You are so very unique.
What an innocent quality you have
about you.  
Delightfully talented and sincere ..
two tremendous qualities, my friend.
~*Marge*~


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Severn
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10 posted 05-31-2000 07:58 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Hey Walt - is this the one?

I Like!

But I guessed...I just knew who you were on about...wizard - lol, indeed!

K
WhtDove
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11 posted 06-01-2000 12:49 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

LOL Walt! This is a good'n. Nothing to be scared of ya ninny hahaha...
You do have an outlook all your own. That's what makes you so unique! Wouldn't want ya any other way  
Corinne
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12 posted 06-01-2000 11:46 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Marge has said it all in her response here, Walt, and Balladeer, as well.

You are a true diamond, shining brightly, don't ever lose that sense of innocence, either, it is quite charming.

Corinne
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