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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2000-05-30 08:02 AM


Loveliness

I wanted to feel your loveliness so I called you up and put in a special request.
You told me some soft kisses were waiting for me over there
so I headed on over with a few of my own to share.
Now we share this warm embrace...
I kiss your lips and caress your face.
I touch your soft skin and now my heart does race.
Loveliness you are such a lovely place.
A fresh kiss and as we lock the door me and the woman I adore experience loveliness once more.

Jameslee@May29,2000






[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 06-03-2000).]

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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2000-05-30 08:24 AM


now i dont think i need coffee at all this poem perked me right up  
Marina
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2 posted 2000-05-30 12:31 PM


James, this is beautiful!  Much shorter then most of your poems and yet you said it all.  I am gald you have found your happiness.

Marina

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2000-05-30 12:44 PM


oooohhhhh me loves ya when your "lovely"SBJ
this is sweet and romantic...
and oh so-- well-- LOVELY  
very nice james...very!!
jm


 There are places inside our souls ...
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts ...
that need to be loved this much.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Poet deVine
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4 posted 2000-05-30 03:42 PM


A romantic poem! Sometimes just being alone is the best thing for a romance...  
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2000-06-03 04:41 PM


Thanks wayoutwalt, Maria, Janet, and PoetdeVine for the wonderful comments.
Love and romance can indeed be lovely. James

Aimster
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6 posted 2000-06-03 05:00 PM


James

yowsers! this was beautiful hon. i loved it! your romantic side is really showing lately m'friend.

take care,
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




JamesMichael
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7 posted 2000-06-07 04:13 PM


Thank you Amy I appreciate your wonderful comments.   James
CocoBaci
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8 posted 2000-06-08 10:29 PM


Oh James, this one is sweet
Loveliness caresses the beauty of the heart
Coco  

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2000-06-11 01:43 PM


Thank you Coco I appreciate that very much.   James
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