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~ Heart's Sanctuary~

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devina
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0 posted 05-30-2000 01:26 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devina


In dream, I sit envisioning your face-
A plight of distant lovers in gentle cascade,
Lovely tendrils of warmth begin to form,
Where the key to my soul lies heavily worn…

Silent grating of heartbeat, nearing a faint-
I grasp for my balance, blessing the saint,
When upon despair, thy form accumulates-
Devouring my tears of silent heartache…

Nearing my fall- I disillusion myself-
Believing in heart, as does everyone else,
Truth lies only within your soft wake-
I give in to caress for my own body’s sake…

Forever, adorned with a hint of love’s spice-
I bleed unto your kisses, at the roll of Fate’s dice,
Speaking softly, the whispers of a Moon Fairy-
I find tender touches within your heart’s sanctuary.    



 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

© Copyright 2000 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
CocoBaci
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1 posted 05-30-2000 01:33 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Absolutely amaaaaaaaaaaazing!  Devina, it's always a treat to come across your poetry.
Coco  
Parker
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2 posted 05-30-2000 01:47 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

devina, this was so sweet, and in a whisper to me it was. Well maybe not me, but you could whisper it to me, come very close... yes within touching distance....  
Cerenity
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3 posted 05-30-2000 08:26 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi devina,

This was absolutly wonderful my dear, I very much enjoy your writting.

Love,  Cerenity
wayoutwalt
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4 posted 05-30-2000 08:28 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

woowoo this be good stuff warm to the core like it lots devina
Irish Rose
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5 posted 05-30-2000 09:13 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

this is as beautiful as you are!!
wow! nice flow and very romantic
"I bleed into your kisses"
ummmmm

 Kathleen
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Marina
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6 posted 05-30-2000 12:36 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Beautiful writing Devina!  I really like this one.  Anything ( or one ) you want to tell us about???

Marina
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7 posted 05-30-2000 10:51 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

CocoBaci- thank you sweets...it's always nice to hear your replies as well!!!

James- Hush and feel my breath across your ear darlin...he he...TY sweet man...

Cerenity- I'm glad you enjoyed...thought it was time for a happy one!!

Walt- glad to be the warmer..ROFL...I mean glad you liked dearie...

Irish Rose- You are definantly making me blush sweetheart...My deepest thanks!!!

Marina- I'll spill it in an email...hope you approve!!LOL  Look for it soon dear... Knew I couldn't keep anything a secret from you!!! he he


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Sven
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8 posted 05-30-2000 11:01 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

*sigh*

This is beautiful Devina. . . just really good. . . it's nice to find that home isn't it?  Hope that it works out. . .

Wonderful poem. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 05-30-2000 11:07 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Devina~
And you chided ME about romanticism ???
This is beautifully YOU !
Hmmmmmm !  Waiting for the mailman, young lady !
Love ya' ..
~*Other Mom*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Alle'cram
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10 posted 05-30-2000 11:17 PM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

Beautifully written. You have shared a romatic dream with us. Enjoyed the read.
devina
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11 posted 05-31-2000 11:15 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Sven-I'm wishing the same for ALL my close friends!! And you sir, will always be on the top of that list...love ya hun!!!

Marge- I know, I'm bad too...But I couldn't let this one go... And I'm sure the mailman already visited your box sweetie!!! Love you!!!


Alle'cram- I'm glad you seen it that way too...TY


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Corinne
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12 posted 05-31-2000 12:01 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Love the etherial feel to this, Devina!  Lovely!

Corinne
Irie
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13 posted 05-31-2000 03:33 PM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Breath taking Miss Devina!
You have such a way of expressing your feelings.
I enjoyed read your work, as always.
Best wishes to you and your new found sanctuary!


 ~Sheri
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14 posted 05-31-2000 04:11 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

In dream, I sit envisioning your face-
A plight of distant lovers in gentle cascade,
Lovely tendrils of warmth begin to form,
Where the key to my soul lies heavily worn…

I especially loved the first verse, overall a beautiful poem. wonderful and sweet like love I guess.


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"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Will you accuse me as I hide Behind these layers of disguise And the mirrors of my own happiness.I've loved the freedom of being inside
Need a new start and a different time
Something grows in the space between me
And it's twisting and changing this fragile body" -Nicky Wire


serenity blaze
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15 posted 05-31-2000 04:54 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

sweet sister mine, you ARE sanctuary of the heart....this was beautiful and deep...love to you....and hugs across the miles...
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