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lucky
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0 posted 05-29-2000 11:59 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lucky

If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name.  (Michelle A. Bartley)

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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 05-30-2000 12:25 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

APPLAUDING this smooth ocean stream with underlying currents with no beginning and no end. Classic Lucky, but even better. It's an amazing piece you've created, my friend, and it will be read here many times over
Superb writing!
LIz
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2 posted 05-30-2000 12:26 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lucky Dale Gwaltney~
This is awesome.  
Such an aesthetic look at the world
under the sea.

Of course my FAVORITE line was -
'like the great weeping willow
in early spiritual winds'

Go figure !  
You are the magic man !
~*Marge*~



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3 posted 05-30-2000 12:27 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

There is another world within the sea...so facinating and beautiful and yes, alien.  Thanks for the scuba's look.  
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 05-30-2000 12:43 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Forgot to meantion that I loved the title and the presentation was excellent
Liz
lucky
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5 posted 05-30-2000 02:03 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Well,

It was about 30 minutes in the writing and I wasn't so sure...

But I'm honored Liz,

And Marge... is there a lack of Willows in all those Palms down on the third coast..?

And Martie... your work too is quite mystique.

thank you all so much.

(Lucky) Dale
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6 posted 05-30-2000 04:12 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Dale~
couldn't help myself   had to reply
I love the sea and you have pictured a most wonderful and exquisite world for which I'm in awe of. Such beauty there lies beneath the sea and yet also danger, this is very well written and expressed.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


lucky
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7 posted 05-30-2000 05:15 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

All right Tracie,

You cuaght me lookin' darn... your a scoundrel, maybe I am too. Thank you very much... And please always forgive me if I am wrong.

Much love,

(Lucky) Dale

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8 posted 05-30-2000 05:41 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Wonderful imagery and so descriptive Lucky ... I can still picture the undulating undercurrents swaying the hands of coral to and fro ... beautifully written, thanks for the picture!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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9 posted 05-30-2000 08:49 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Lucky,

Enjoyed the trip so much, never been down below until now, thanks so much for taking me. WONDERFUL

Love  Cerenity
 
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