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The Cure

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Kevin
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0 posted 05-29-2000 10:46 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

The Cure

I think a lot these days
At night I lie awake
My memory replays
every single mistake

I wish i could have been
your everything and more
I missed my chance again
Iíve little to live for

If you could only see
The way Iím so unsure
I know you'd set me free
I know you hold the cure
© Copyright 2000 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-29-2000 10:51 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

You can't change the past, so don't regret it so much. You should tell this girl how you feel, and stop regretting it. That would be "The cure"

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
Kevin
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2 posted 05-30-2000 08:43 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

Thanks for replying LB

i guess im starting to fall off with my writing I dont hear from anyone anymore

and maybe your right
But it cant change things
~ViXeN~
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3 posted 05-30-2000 10:52 PM       View Profile for ~ViXeN~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~ViXeN~

Kev, never give up on love, because love will never give up on you...
you never know when you think its alll done and over with that it could be and maybe was there all along....

shan
ps. this is one of the sweetest things i have read in a long time.
Marina
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4 posted 05-30-2000 11:27 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

I think your writing is every bit as it ever was, and believe me it was always excellent. Perhaps it is all in the timing.  As it is in relationship's my friend.

Marina
spiked
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5 posted 05-30-2000 11:50 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

There is a saying
If you love something set it free
if is truely yours it will return.
Keep your chin up my young friend
sweetea
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6 posted 05-31-2000 12:00 AM       View Profile for sweetea   Email sweetea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sweetea

What Spiked has quoted is so true and I speak from personal experience.

Do not let past relationships influence future ones.  Keep your spirits high.

[This message has been edited by sweetea (edited 05-31-2000).]
Alle'cram
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7 posted 05-31-2000 03:22 AM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

Kevin, don't be sad. "My memory replays
every single mistake"; Tonight play the good memories, the happy times, reflect on the positives. Compare these times to now, what's changed, you? her? Don't live in fear of holding onto her, oh, darn, I could write a book. I agree with everyone above. Marcy
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8 posted 05-31-2000 08:59 AM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

Hiya Kevin. There was a time in my life when I used to look back at all the decisions I'd made in my life, all the mistakes, all those odd turns of fate, wondering "what would have happened if...?" and regretting a lot of those decisions. As I got older though, new opportunities presented themselves, new chances not to make a mistake (or new chances TO make a mistake   ) At some stage, I realized that without those mistakes, quirks of fate, whatever, I wouldn't be who I am, where I am or what I am today. So, look forward to the future and use your experiences wisely  

Best wishes,
Eric.
Parker
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... the old black rum


9 posted 05-31-2000 10:27 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Hey Kevin, glad to see your stuff back, this is great. Pure Kevin as I see it.... you should repost some of your old stuff, for all these new commers here....
What was that one about into the black or well I don't remember.. anyway new or old their very cool

Parker
Corinne
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state of confusion


10 posted 05-31-2000 10:37 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

So sad for such a young man, Kevin.  Don't let the writing fall off, it doesn't matter what others think about it, it only matters what YOU think!

And it's as good as ever, just kind of sad for one with so much ahead of him!

Corinne
JamesMichael
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11 posted 05-31-2000 04:10 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Soft and touching...I also have a special one that I adore...she holds the key to her heart...I can only be myself and hope for the cure.   James
Kevin
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12 posted 05-31-2000 09:12 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

Thank you guys, to recieve this kind of response after watching my poem slide down the list untouched was very gratifying,

Shan, you know i hang on your every word, so just hearing from you is sweet =)

Mar, i guess you were right, on both counts

Spiked, Letting go aint easy

St, I think subconciously we always do

Good advice crem, will do

wise words eric, thanks, comforting =)

Maybe I will hal, and youll be the first to her about it =)

Cornnie, emotions know no age, and unfortunately for me, no mercy either =)

Glad ya liked it jmlee =)
 
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