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You've Just Got A Way About You

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Marge Tindal
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You've Just Got A Way About You
~*Marge Tindal*~

What is it about your love, soft and sweet
That sweeps me completely off of my feet
Phrases sung in passionate tunes of night
Rocking me gently 'til morns early light

Whispered on song of whipporwill's refrain
Returning to me again and again
Dreams come folded in delightful slumber
Counting of sheep, matters not the number

Holding me close when the sun finds the day
Waltzing my worries and troubles away
Folding me gently in arms so tender
I lose myself in sweetest surrender

You've just got a way about you, baby
That makes me think I've got a chance, maybe





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-29-2000 10:20 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Oooh Marge....this is exactly how I feel..and you say it with lovely grace and elegance, as always.  All of your works are exceptional, and this is no exception.  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~


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2 posted 05-29-2000 10:49 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Oh Marge, this is a beautiful love poem. It's wonderful when we find the person who makes us feel like that. Great poem.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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Well, I gotta find this guy to tell me what his secret is!!! I envy the guy that could make you feel that way, Marge. Nicely written....as always.  
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4 posted 05-30-2000 12:36 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Marge, I think this could be put to music and become an instant hit, of course, it is anyway, without the music, just beautiful!
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5 posted 05-30-2000 12:40 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Martie, you're right, what a great song
What a great lady who wrote it
Beautiful, Marge
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6 posted 05-30-2000 01:12 AM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Marge~

I think you just have a way about writing all this fine poetry!!!  Great work, my friend!!  

A chance is all we can ever hope for.

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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7 posted 05-30-2000 01:29 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This was a sweetly romantic spot from you Miss Priss...G* Me thinks you need to show it more often around here!!! Love ya girl!!!  

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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8 posted 05-30-2000 01:30 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

.. folding me gently in arms so tender .. Oh Marge I can sense your surrender (teehee).  Such sweet poetry my goodness it's so delightful to read your verses!
Coco
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9 posted 05-30-2000 03:46 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Oh Marge chances are you'll sweep him off his feet, especially if he see's something like this from you.
just wonderful  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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10 posted 05-30-2000 05:00 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh Marge, this is gorgeous!! loved it.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


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Floating gently on a cloud....


11 posted 05-30-2000 06:01 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

What a beautiful poem!!!! If ya put it to music it would be no 1 in the Top 20 for sure! You are a remarkable poetess...and a wonderful person. Love ya, Marge!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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12 posted 05-30-2000 06:10 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

I'm with Martie and ESP Marge!  With a little melody behind that ... sing on!  Wonderful and romantic!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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Krista~
I'm glad you like it.  What a nice compliment.

LoveBug~
I am really pleased you like.

Balladeer~
Tee-Hee !  What a guy !

Martie~
Awwwww !  I just *HUG* you !

Lizzie~
Awwwww ! U2 !

LoneWolf~
What a neat line for you to come up with.
I appreciate you.

Devina~
I'm glad you love the 'romantic' Ms. Priss !

CocoBaci~
How sweet of you to say so.  Thank you.

Tracie~
Thanks, gal !

DarkAngel~
Glad you found it so.

Lil' Lizzie~
I'm really pleased everyone wants to sing this one.  Makes me HAPPY !

Kit~
Thank you ... I usually sing as I write so this pleases me.
LOVE TO YOU ALL !
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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14 posted 05-30-2000 08:56 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Marge,

I am just simply happy for you my dear, your poetry sings of such perfect love, it really does make you want to SING OUT LOUD its melodys.

Love,  Cerenity
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This is very lovely, Marge!

Denise
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very nice, hope whoever this was for gives you that chance.  seems like you are a very loving and caring soul.  good work, like it a lot.

 P. J. Kotrch
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A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love

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17 posted 05-30-2000 10:45 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Kinda reminds me of what the spider said to Miss Muffet.........
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It looks to me as if you have a real good chance, Marge.  Great poem - full of images and promises...
Marge Tindal
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Cerenity~
Thanks, kiddo.  I love to write 'happy'.

Denise~
Thank you.  Good to see you.

EPoet~
Thanks, it's for anyone, everyone and
the good ones - twice !

BAlladeer~
Are you sure we're not related ???
Whey too cool !

LongJohn~
So good to see you here playing among friends.  HI Lorelei ~
Love ya' all -
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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20 posted 05-30-2000 04:39 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Is there room for a little sax in there somewhere Marge?...

HUSG
Marge Tindal
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RainbowGirl~
Just for you ... a little sex !
Whoops ! ... S A X, I meant S A X !
Love ya' gal friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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