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Colorful Haiku
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Colorful Haiku |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Prisms dance in light merry mood, dancing brightly rainbows in my sight ©KRJ 29 May 2000 Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This reminds me of looking at the sun through the rain!!! I like...  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunshine~ You just know I love it ! Yep ! I do !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Me too - Me too...  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
nice work |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Prism took a ray of light, of hope, shade of white, gave out from its heart, a properous rainbow, what a delight! Karilea, you have another beautiful and likeable haiku here.... regards, sudhir Hey you, out there in the cold, Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me? Hey you, standing in the aisle, With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me? Hey you, don't help them to bury the light. Don't give in without a fight. Hey you, out there on your own, Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me? Hey you, with your ear against the wall, Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me? Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone? Open your heart, I'm coming home.... by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You're on a roll Sunshine ... colourful and well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Too much Sunshine can make a person go haiku mad.......... this one is wonderfull. Parker |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Parker, I will go hide behind a cloud...LOL at your comment...{~,^} Thanks for reading... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Sunshine this is pretty and delightful. well done. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
colourful by name clourful by nature colourful by hakiu. wonderful did I mention it was colourful. ------------------------ "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Will you accuse me as I hide Behind these layers of disguise And the mirrors of my own happiness.I've loved the freedom of being inside Need a new start and a different time Something grows in the space between me And it's twisting and changing this fragile body" -Nicky Wire |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Thanks for the bright words. So dreary here. Joy |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
big smiles yuh |
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