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I wish for you

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vandana
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0 posted 05-29-2000 07:01 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


Day and night,
I pray for you,
To come back and take me,
My life would be much happier,
just being with you,
I wish for you,
I wish upon the stars,
Every night,
I stand outside  all night,
Wish on a star,
pray for you
to come back,
I wish for you
It's hard to live without you,
So that's why,
I wish for you,
Iam wishing upon a star for you,
To come back,
I know why they say,
when you're alone
and need someone to lean on,
But still ,
Life goes on,
It's never end,
And If we wish for someone
the will surely come to you,
So that's why,
I keep wishing upon the star,
I wish for you,
every day and night,
I wish for you,
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Mike
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1 posted 05-29-2000 08:28 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

May your wishes come true Vandana.. nicely written.  I enjoyed.
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2 posted 05-29-2000 09:14 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

So sad.....thank you for sharing this with us.  
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 05-29-2000 09:16 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

VanDana~
Oh, sweetie ... *HUGS* to you.
This is so sweet ... I can feel your
hurt ... I'll wish on a star for you too.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


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4 posted 05-29-2000 09:28 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Vandana, although a wish is silent and never spoke somehow the feelings are captured and echoed above the skies where angels soar to comfort one as they make their wish at nite.
This poem you've shared reaches out to many a soul

Coco
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Hi Vandana!
You capture my feelings too well .

Sincerely
A_L
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6 posted 05-30-2000 10:40 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

"I wish I may, I wish I might
Have the wish I wish tonight... "

Vandana, this was a very heartfelt poem. . . I hope that your wish does indeed come true, but you can't wish forever. . . you must move on sometime. . . and I'm glad that you show that in this poem. . .

Excellent my friend...

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