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Nicole
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0 posted 2000-05-29 04:19 PM


Disk one
   track two

yes
that's it
Get the pain out in a rush
let it go
let it go
let it go

         let it go from here

Can't sate the need
    need
to think things through
through
muddy thought smears
clouding my mind's eye
And funny that -
     I hold the palette
of frustration
   -yes
and ... loss?

uuhg loss
       such an ugly color
let it go
let it go
let it go
       no - but

I
  just
       don't
             want
                  to
...
where to now?

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Sven
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1 posted 2000-05-29 04:45 PM


Disk Two Track Three. . .

What is the color of loss?

Some would say that it's a dark blue
To reflect the feeling
Some would say that it's a black
To reflect the heart
Some would say that it's red
To reflect the anger
Some would say that it's grey
To reflect the days

The color of loss?
Take a look at the palette of life
That's the color of loss

Satiate,
        the feelings in this poem are such that I could only express them back to you poetically. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-05-29 05:16 PM


Satiate~
Very interesting.
I just pushed Replay !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2000-05-29 06:12 PM


Well, I've never made it to Track Two 'cause I've been told I have a one-track mind but I thoroughly enjoy this poem and your writing style  
Nicole
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4 posted 2000-05-30 01:12 AM


Sven, what can I say?  I'm flattered much, at your touching reply.  Thank you..

Marge, aww!    Thank you

M'deer,   !  I thoroughly enjoy you!

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