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When Love Finds You

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Marina
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0 posted 05-29-2000 02:28 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marina

When Love Finds You


Some say it is fate
That helps you find a mate
For that day, we can not wait

It is a crazy game… love
Finding the one you dream of
Who fits you, just like a glove

Someone who is so dear
To lay to rest your fear
And wipe away, your lonely tear

No more feeling blue
The world is brand new
When love, finds you


Marina May 2000

© Copyright 2000 Marina Crossley - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 05-29-2000 02:30 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

12 lines of amazing clarity in thought Marina...

I liked this aplenty...particularly,

Someone who is so dear
To lay to rest your fear
And wipe away, your lonely tear


Regards,
Sudhir


 Hey you, out there in the cold,
Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me?
Hey you, standing in the aisle,
With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me?
Hey you, don't help them to bury the light.
Don't give in without a fight.
Hey you, out there on your own,
Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me?
Hey you, with your ear against the wall,
Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me?
Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone?
Open your heart, I'm coming home....

by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall
Janet Marie
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2 posted 05-29-2000 02:41 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Love will indeed make us crazy...
and it can make us blue.
But it is worth every tear
when we find love so true.

Two hearts become one ...
contentment is found.
Two sould become one,
by love's promises they are bound.

perfect poem marina-girl ...
we seem to be on the same wavelength once again...
maybe we should put and ad in the paper  
later poet-gator


 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Sven
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3 posted 05-29-2000 02:53 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Marina,
       now who's the romantic one?  This is just wonderful. . .

Couldn't have said it better myself. . .

"The world is brand new
When love, finds you"

Yes it is my friend. . . hope that your world is a brighter place. . .

-----------------------------------------------------



 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

CocoBaci
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4 posted 05-29-2000 03:10 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

~ So sweet this poem ~
  Coco
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 05-29-2000 04:00 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Marina~
Clearly, the harder one searches
the more it eludes.
Best to stand still and let it come.
Enjoyed the read.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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EagleOne
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Posts 2858
Between a laugh and a tear...


6 posted 05-29-2000 04:42 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

"The world is brand new
When love, finds you"

Indded it is,  

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


Marina
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Pickering, Ontario


7 posted 05-29-2000 08:48 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Sudhir, thank you very much for your compliment.  Your support is greatly appreciated.

jan, what should our ad read.  Wanted.....One good man??
Loved your poem you added. ( show off!!! LOL)

Sven, thank you as always.  I can always count on you to have such a wonderful sweet compliment. When you find happiness, eveywhere is a brighter place.

Coco, thank you

Marge, I think you may be right.  Sometimes the old saying....seek and you shall find, may not always hold true.  Thank you for your post.

EagleOne, thanks to you also.  I am glad you liked it.

Marina
Alwye
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In the space between moments


8 posted 05-29-2000 10:26 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Very beautiful...definitely rings with truth. You have wonderful talent, do keep it up!  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~


LoveBug
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9 posted 05-29-2000 10:46 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Ah, this is a beautiful poem. Yes, it is wonderful when love finds you. Great job.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
JamesMichael
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10 posted 05-30-2000 06:43 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Here's to a brand new world hon....such a lovely poem.  James
shilpi
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11 posted 05-30-2000 07:30 AM       View Profile for shilpi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shilpi

So much is said in those few brilliant lines....very well expressed, Marina !!

regards, shilpi
Dark Angel
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12 posted 05-30-2000 07:46 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Beautiful indeed Marina  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


Marina
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13 posted 05-30-2000 01:01 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Alwye, thank you so very much for your compliment.  Coming from a poet such as yourself, I am humbled.

Lovebug, thank you

James, I think we both deserve a drink don't you.  Cheers!!

shilpi, thank you I am glad you enjoyed it.

Dark Angel, thank you
 
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