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This Brave Knight
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This Brave Knight |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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This brave knight stands The last in line To battle for love His call divine The sword of truth Now he holds Honor his shield Battles the foe He stands defiant Hearing the call He'll not rest Till they fall Never defeated His pledge remains To life itself And love the same His madness deepens He feels her pain He sees her tears Fall down like rain He holds her heart In his hands Keeping it safe From time's sands The sorcerers die Their evil defeated Drawing from each other The strength that's needed The damsel rescued Her heart made whole Her song of thanks Filling his soul My tale ends now A tale of might Telling the love Of this brave knight -------------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 05-29-2000).] |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
What a quaint romantic tale you tell here. I have always liked your Knight stories. Now if I could just find my knight in shining armour, I'd be in business! LOL Marina |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wonderful tales of love, you weave, ever so romantic, ever so classy... Sven, your poems are a delight to read... Regards, sudhir. P.S. a spelling error has creeped in 8 lines from the end (rescued). sorry for pointing out a very small blemish, but thought it necessary to point it anyway... Hey you, out there in the cold, Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me? Hey you, standing in the aisle, With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me? Hey you, don't help them to bury the light. Don't give in without a fight. Hey you, out there on your own, Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me? Hey you, with your ear against the wall, Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me? Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone? Open your heart, I'm coming home.... by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Sven, I always look forward to your posts. I love a romantic and a gentleman at heart. Wish there were more like you. Your words always speak straight to my heart. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
wonderful romantic storytelling! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ Once again you've pierced our hearts with the sword of love. No body does it better, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rhavin Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 28 |
Excellent poem Sven. I enjoyed it immensly |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
See! I knew you were a Knight! Wonderful, Sir Sven! I curtsey to you.  |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Sven, That was a wonderful poem! I love the way you told a story with it. Just wonderful... Keep writing! I almost missed this one too.... grr...  "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thanks to everyone. . . Marina, perhaps you're not looking in the right places!! Sudhir, thank you my friend, and thanks for pointing out the spelling error. . . took care of it. lori, there are more like me, we just don't like to brag about ourselves a lot. . . Beki, thank you. . . Marge, my sword for my people. . . thank you my friend. . . Rhavin, thank you my friend. . . Lady deVine, *bowing* I thank thee gentle woman for thy wonderous response. Thou hast indeed made my day!! Dawn, thank you so much. . . glad that you didn't miss it!!! -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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traveling heart Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 26 |
*Sigh* Quite a piece of work there Sven, I was really quite taken up in it... I shall enjoy reading more from you. TH |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
A most wonderous tale Sven. This is very well written with the most fantastic imagery charmedTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You weave such magical tales Sven ... wonderful work, romantic and touching, I enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is absoulutely DIVINE dear Sven...I love the whole subject of chivalry and Knights in shining armor...*sigh* Maybe one day, eh??? Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
*SIGH* Ohh Sven, you've gone and done it again! Hearts are melting everywhere my friend. You certainly have a way with words. This took me back to the age of Shakespear.....So much love! Very, very well done Mister Svenster!  ~Sheri |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely and romantic Sven....James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sven-- as always your work is simply devine! i loved how you weaved story and poetry together. you are a master of romance...and your writing tells it all beautiful sven...beautiful!take care amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Traveling heart, thank you my friend, and I look forward to reading more from you as well. . . Tracie, thank you so much!! (: Kit, my loom is at work! Glad that you liked. Devina, you never know. . . you never know. . .thank you. . . (; Irie, thank you my friend!! The time machine is ready!!! James, thank you. . . Amy, thank you, but Master? I don't know about that. . . I just write what I feel. . .thank you. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sven, I loved your poem! It was so romantic. It is good to know that there are a few gentleman left in the world. I can't wait to read more.rosepedals25 |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Sven wonderfully romantic...lovely tale ~Lorraine |
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