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~Whispering Wind~

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tracie66
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0 posted 05-29-2000 03:07 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Whispering Wind

She can touch you with her gentle breeze
Which brush past you with soft plea's

Plea's of longing to gently flow through your mind
To touch your soul and heart so Blind

She whispers softly touching words and you soon become one
She wraps around you begging you to follow her to the sun

So she can warm you and keep you safe
Whispering wind softly whispers the faith

She'll spirit you away to help show you the light
hopefully soon it is in sight

Go with the wind of gentle breeze
And listen carefully to her plea's

You may find yourself following her to the sun
Where you and her are bound to become one


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
shilpi
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1 posted 05-29-2000 03:14 AM       View Profile for shilpi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shilpi


Tracie, I am glad I read this one....felt so soothing, was like I could actually hear the plea's !!

regards, shilpi
Irie
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2 posted 05-29-2000 03:16 AM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Now THIS is great!
Made me feel like I was floating about as I read this!
Well done Tracie
tracie66
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3 posted 05-29-2000 03:30 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

shilpi~
Hi welcome to passions   thanks for your lovely comment. I wrote this the other night it came from nowhere and I think it is rather spiritual don't you think so.
Tracie~

Irie~
A welcome to you to   I'm glad you liked this and thanks for replying.
Tracie~

 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Sven
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4 posted 05-29-2000 03:47 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Tracie,
        I can hear the wind blowing. . . and so can he. . .

Just very tender my friend. . .

Excellent. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Dark Angel
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5 posted 05-29-2000 04:50 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is beautiful Tracie. Well Done.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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6 posted 05-29-2000 06:09 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Oh, beautiful, exquisite poem!  Thank you for sharing it!  I know that wind.  Ah, yes, I know that wind.  Keep writing, my dear friend, keep writing!!!
~ ~ ~



 The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G.

Kit McCallum
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7 posted 05-29-2000 06:11 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Very gentle and sweet ... a lovely poem Tracie ...

Best wishes,
/Kit
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8 posted 05-29-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, little Tracie~
How the sweet spirit of the wind whispered to your heart for this lovley poem.

Yes, spiritual indeed.
To be at one with the wind is a marvelous thing.  When it blows you into another's path that is even more miraculous.
We are one in spirit.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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brian madden
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9 posted 05-29-2000 06:57 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

wonderful.

Plea's of longing to gently flow through your mind
To touch your soul and heart so Blind

beautiful poem.



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"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
Douglas Adams.

"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Do not listen to a word I say
Just listen to what I can keep silent"

Nicky Wire

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10 posted 05-29-2000 07:09 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Wow,what a lovely poem.I love it!!!!!
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11 posted 05-29-2000 07:41 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

tracie--
i loved this! very expressive piece you have here...like the others i too felt as though i was floating on air...pure magic you created in this one!

take care,
amy  

 
"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

CocoBaci
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12 posted 05-29-2000 08:46 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Tracie, as always reading the verses you write just touch my heart and reach into my soul .. a pleasure indeed to come across your poetry.
Coco
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13 posted 05-29-2000 10:35 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

such beauty...this flows like the wind itself....exceptional work.  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~


Janet Marie
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14 posted 05-29-2000 11:59 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

She can touch you with her gentle breeze
Which brush past you with soft plea's

Plea's of longing to gently flow through your mind
To touch your soul and heart so Blind

She whispers softly touching words and you soon become one
She wraps around you begging you to follow her to the sun
------------

Tracie-girl this is indeed exquisite!!
this is one of your best and one of my most favs.
soothing, sensual, and spirtual.
wondeful imagery and emotions expressed
featherlight and perfect flow
later T-gator,
jm




 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


lucky
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15 posted 05-30-2000 12:14 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Like the lag in the spacing... allows for a thoughtful picture. Nice gentle touch.



 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)
Elizabeth Santos
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16 posted 05-30-2000 12:20 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Pretty words from a beautiful heart
Loved it, Tracie
Liz
tracie66
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WOW...I didn't expect to see so many replies upon my return tonight   thanks

Sven~
Thankyou for reading dear friend, I was glad you liked it.
Tracie~

Dark Angel~
So pleased you liked this and thanks.
Tracie~

Rosemary~
Yes indeed, I thought you'd know that wind. Just very soothing isn't she. Thanks
Tracie~

Kit~
Thanks and best wishes to you to  
Tracie~

Marge my sweet friend I knew you would like this and I was right   the spiritual wind is one we would all like to be as one with. thanks for reading.
Luv Tracie~

Brian~
Glad you liked this and thanks for your reply.
Tracie~

Vandana~
Thankyou for your sweet reply  
Tracie~

Aimster~
pleased to have created a little bit of magic for you  
Tracie~

Coco~
You're a little treasure, what lovely words you have said here and I thank you indeed  
Tracie~

Alwye~
I hope she blows your way.
Tracie~

Janet Marie~
You know just what to say and I thank you for reading this and commenting so sweetly   means alot to know this is a fav of yours.
Take care Tracie~

Lucky~
Buddy O mine  
glad you liked, does mean alot.
take care
Tracie~

Liz~
So glad you read this and my next words are going to sound soppy but I was actually thinking of you when posting this. Hope your o'kay and take care.
Tracie~





 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe




[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 05-30-2000).]
SpitFire
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18 posted 05-30-2000 11:56 AM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Peekaboo,...this one hasn't seen it all yet.  I absolutely love this piece.  *Sigh*,..what a wonderful feeling this brought on.  I feel like I'm floating...your words are beautiful. Thank you for posting such a treasure. *Peace.
Sudhir Iyer
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19 posted 05-30-2000 11:59 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Whispering wind, sweetly made sweet melodies in my ears...

Wonderful work, Tracie.

Regards, sudhir

 Hey you, out there in the cold,
Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me?
Hey you, standing in the aisle,
With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me?
Hey you, don't help them to bury the light.
Don't give in without a fight.
Hey you, out there on your own,
Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me?
Hey you, with your ear against the wall,
Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me?
Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone?
Open your heart, I'm coming home....

by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall
tracie66
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Peekaboo back to you
Hello little spitfire thank you for your most gracious comments  
Tracie~

Sudhir~
Hi my friend, I hope your ears always here sweet melodies thats what they deserve  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


 
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