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eyesplus2
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0 posted 05-29-2000 02:39 AM       View Profile for eyesplus2   Email eyesplus2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for eyesplus2

A heart beats strong and true
  more powerful than the strongest hurt
yet able to be broken with a single look


A touch giving warmth and joy
yet able to be cold and aloof


A smile able to stop the saddest tears
yet the lack of one
able to crush all life from you


A word giving all meaning to two becoming one
The lack of words cutting all the way to the bone


A heart beats all for you
I want to touch you for ever and a day more
I smile whenever I see you in my heart
  The words I say will let me become one with you..I Love you today,  tomorrow, and yesterday......


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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 05-29-2000 07:44 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Lovely poem EyesPlus. I enjoyed the way you created the "hot" and "cold" mix of feelings.  Nicely done!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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2 posted 05-29-2000 06:22 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Eyes+2~
'A heart beats all for you
I want to touch you forever and a day more'

My sentiments - EXACTLY !
~*Marge*~



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brian madden
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3 posted 05-29-2000 06:55 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

A smile able to stop the saddest tears
yet the lack of one
able to crush all life from you


A word giving all meaning to two becoming one
The lack of words cutting all the way to the bone


loved those images. I enjoyed your poem wonderful constrast of emotions.



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"Here chewing your tail is joy"

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"Do not listen to a word I say
Just listen to what I can keep silent"

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4 posted 05-29-2000 08:34 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Simply exquisite the verse that captured me was ~ A word giving all meaning to two becoming one The lack of words cutting all the way to the bone ~  
Eyes, I enjoyed this very much!

Coco
Corinne
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Liked the contrasts here.

Corinne
 
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