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Alle'cram
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since 02-28-2000
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0 posted 05-28-2000 11:55 PM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alle'cram

so often we feel discouraged
motives, not a friend
we kneel in prayer
forgiveness found
friends pull me up from here!

sometimes the climb is simple
often the valley deep
remember hands extended down
to pull you to your feet

life moves on
time stands not still
valleys depths' now gone
self placed aside,
corrections made
lessons to be learned

salvation's plan
alive and well
for all to look and see
this is but a reason
Christ Jesus died
for you
and me

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Alina Le Ann
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since 01-30-2000
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1 posted 05-29-2000 12:35 AM       View Profile for Alina Le Ann   Email Alina Le Ann   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Alina Le Ann's Home Page   View IP for Alina Le Ann

This is surly from the heart and a beautiful one at that.
Well written

Alina Le Ann
Kit McCallum
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2 posted 05-29-2000 09:32 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

These are wonderful sentiments, and a gentle reminder Alle'cram ... lovely.

Best wishes,
/Kit
Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 05-29-2000 01:27 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

I ditto Kit, Alle'cram...

Regards,
Sudhir

 Hey you, out there in the cold,
Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me?
Hey you, standing in the aisle,
With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me?
Hey you, don't help them to bury the light.
Don't give in without a fight.
Hey you, out there on your own,
Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me?
Hey you, with your ear against the wall,
Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me?
Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone?
Open your heart, I'm coming home....

by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall
CocoBaci
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4 posted 05-29-2000 03:20 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Very nicely written the verses seem to just flow ..
Coco
Alle'cram
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5 posted 05-29-2000 05:25 PM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

Thanks to all my new friends who took the time to read and respond. This was written for a specail pal who is feeling down in the dumps. I just wanted to remind her of all the outstretched hands waiting to pull her up. Hope she reads the poem. Thanks again. When time permits, I will read each of your poems. Blessings, Marcy
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