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kaile
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Touching me tender~
Not a trace of its presence~
Except dancing leaves
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kaile
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1 posted 05-29-2000 11:06 PM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

comments please
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Kaile~
this is very soothing, a delightful little Haiku
Tracie~


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Very nice indeed!   well done.

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
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Hi Kaile,

How about simply pleasing to the soul.

Love,  Cerenity
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You sure there's no trace of it's presence except dancing leaves?? What about the ruffled hair? Or that tiny dust particle that got into your eye?  

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