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kaile
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0 posted 2000-05-28 10:12 PM


Touching me tender~
Not a trace of its presence~
Except dancing leaves

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kaile
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1 posted 2000-05-29 11:06 PM


comments please
tracie66
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2 posted 2000-05-30 03:49 AM


Kaile~
this is very soothing, a delightful little Haiku
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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3 posted 2000-05-30 04:56 AM


Very nice indeed!   well done.

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)



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4 posted 2000-05-30 08:43 AM


Hi Kaile,

How about simply pleasing to the soul.

Love,  Cerenity

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5 posted 2001-12-05 01:16 PM


You sure there's no trace of it's presence except dancing leaves?? What about the ruffled hair? Or that tiny dust particle that got into your eye?  

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Florence

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