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Scented Rose

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Mike
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0 posted 05-28-2000 07:11 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mike

The softest notes of nightingale,
...as gentle breath of dawn,
Float in whisper on night's breeze,
...'mid songs of heaven's spawn.

How sweet the music of the heart,
...doth echo truer far,
Than madrigal's of Muses fair,
...sang from a distant star.

Not a harp, nor zephyr heard,
...when dream of scented Rose,
But softest note of nightingale,
...as bloom in my heart grows.



[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 05-28-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Mike - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 05-28-2000 07:27 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Mike~
No one perfumes the rose quite like you do.
Simply fragrant with loveliness.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Janet Marie
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2 posted 05-28-2000 11:38 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

The softest notes of nightingale,
...as gentle breath of dawn,
Float in whisper on night's breeze,
...'mid songs of heaven's spawn.
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*sigh*
this poem is exquisite,
a jewel, perfect.
take care,
jm


 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Denise
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3 posted 05-29-2000 12:02 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely, Mike!

Denise
Alina Le Ann
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4 posted 05-29-2000 12:26 AM       View Profile for Alina Le Ann   Email Alina Le Ann   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Alina Le Ann's Home Page   View IP for Alina Le Ann

This is very....how do I put this....gripping maybe. I guess you could say I'm speechless. I don't know how else to reply except "wow"


Sincerely,
Alina Le Ann
Martie
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5 posted 05-29-2000 12:28 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Mike--How sweet the music of the heart? Yours with this blossom!
Mike
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6 posted 05-29-2000 09:39 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Marge, I oft feel like a wilted petunia amongst roses when I read some of the beauty contained in Passions.  Thank you for the gracious comment.
Janet Marie... thank you kindly for the exquisite. *smile*
Denise...  a very lovely from a very lovely lady... can't top that...
Alina... you are very kind in your reply, glad you enjoyed.
Martie...enjoy a beautiful day today my friend, and let the music of your heart sing forth.
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 05-29-2000 04:55 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Mike,
I can only say that I could listen to your poetic music all day long. It's just so beautiful. This is exquisite
Liz
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8 posted 05-29-2000 05:50 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

The softest notes of nightingale,
...as gentle breath of dawn,
Float in whisper on night's breeze,
...'mid songs of heaven's spawn.
How sweet the music of the heart,
...doth echo truer far,
Than madrigal's of Muses fair,
...sang from a distant star.

Not a harp, nor zephyr heard,
...when dream of scented Rose,
But softest note of nightingale,
...as bloom in my heart grows.


Mike a wonderful poem, beautiful. I can smell the roses through the screen like those scratch and sniff stickers only much better. homer says "ummmm rose fresh"

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"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
Douglas Adams.

"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Do not listen to a word I say
Just listen to what I can keep silent"

Nicky Wire

Kit McCallum
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9 posted 05-29-2000 05:55 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

You've penned this beautifully Mike ... your rhythm is superb, absolutely lovely!

Best wishes,
/Kit
David2
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10 posted 05-29-2000 06:33 PM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

Mike,
   This is excellent work! It is a beautiful picture of love. Your machanics are excellent also.
                    David2
                          
Nan
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11 posted 05-29-2000 06:57 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I hereby bestow upon thee... the honorary title of.. "King of Roses"... You should write a book on the subject - No one makes a rose rise - rose raise - raise a rose?...like Mike...  



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vandana
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12 posted 05-29-2000 07:05 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

I love your poem very much!!!!!!
 
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