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shilpi
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        Mysteries

.....yes, thats what you are to me
All along I've known you so well
Yet, with each passing heartbeat
I feel there is more left to know

Why is it that my heart skips a beat
Each time I think of you ?
What about that ocean warmth of contentment
That lushes around me when you hold me ?

The hundred different paths my emotions follow
At the sound of your name on my lips
And over a hundred more of your mischeivious gleams
The numerous ways you make me feel immensely beautiful

It will always remain a mystery
How,even in your deepest silence,
I hear the many ways
You tell that you love me

But the greatest mystery of all
is that......
You & I are not two realities
But one truth

.....As vast as the desert sand dunes
And as mysterious as the desert mirages
I would rather spend my entire lifetime
Unravelling your mysteries.....
Than be with someone predictable.





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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 05-28-2000 11:42 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

"But the greatest mystery of all
is that......
You & I are not two realities
But one truth"

Wonderful poem Shilpi ... I particularly liked the power in the line above. Well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 05-28-2000 03:51 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Excellent words, nice sentiments, shilpi...

I am glad I read this one...

Regards, sudhir



 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.
shilpi
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Thankyou for reading it and posting your response, Kit

shilpi
shilpi
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4 posted 05-29-2000 12:49 AM       View Profile for shilpi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shilpi


.....and I appreciate your words, Sudhir !!
Its a pleasure to read your response....well, not as much as your poems, though !!

shilpi
 
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