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lucky
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0 posted 05-28-2000 06:40 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lucky



[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 06-01-2000).]
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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 05-28-2000 06:57 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This is so dear and heartwarming Lucky ... it's just lovely ...

Best wishes,
/Kit
brian madden
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2 posted 05-28-2000 06:59 AM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

I always loved the word pearl, for some strange reason.

your poem was beautiful,

miniature mystic wand my loving little girl
curled and tucked lightly in my arms such tiny
delicate hands playing on daz lazy airs such a
faery-dusted dream to calm my storms of
grief and freshen these weary
seasons hear.

reading it almost felt like a spell was been cast, magical.

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"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
Douglas Adams.

"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Do not listen to a word I say
Just listen to what I can keep silent"

Nicky Wire

lucky
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3 posted 05-28-2000 07:35 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Kit,

I meant to have a picture of our little girl in there. Sucks didn't work... Some people have all the luck. This is actually something that RJ. wrote... I just love her so much... well, you could see it on our site. Thanks so much...

Love ya, Dale
Lorraine Nisbet
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4 posted 05-28-2000 08:27 AM       View Profile for Lorraine Nisbet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorraine Nisbet


Lucky,

Absolutely lovely!

~Lorraine
                  

 
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