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lucky
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0 posted 2000-05-28 06:40 AM




[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 06-01-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Dale W. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-05-28 06:57 AM


This is so dear and heartwarming Lucky ... it's just lovely ...

Best wishes,
/Kit

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
2 posted 2000-05-28 06:59 AM


I always loved the word pearl, for some strange reason.

your poem was beautiful,

miniature mystic wand my loving little girl
curled and tucked lightly in my arms such tiny
delicate hands playing on daz lazy airs such a
faery-dusted dream to calm my storms of
grief and freshen these weary
seasons hear.

reading it almost felt like a spell was been cast, magical.

 ------------------------
"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
Douglas Adams.

"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Do not listen to a word I say
Just listen to what I can keep silent"

Nicky Wire


lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
3 posted 2000-05-28 07:35 AM


Kit,

I meant to have a picture of our little girl in there. Sucks didn't work... Some people have all the luck. This is actually something that RJ. wrote... I just love her so much... well, you could see it on our site. Thanks so much...

Love ya, Dale

Lorraine Nisbet
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since 2000-05-18
Posts 218
Jersey City, NJ USA
4 posted 2000-05-28 08:27 AM



Lucky,

Absolutely lovely!

~Lorraine
                  

 
A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur


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