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Sven
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0 posted 05-28-2000 03:46 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Standing here, waiting to begin
     Looking back at where we've been
You came into my life from out of the blue
And I can't think of a better time
                       than this to tell you

A lot has happened from the start
     Since the begining, you've had my heart
From the day we met "we were more than friends"
And my love "I can hardly wait
                       till we meet again"

Walking together with hope in our hands
     I've given hope, you've helped me stand
From each other my love we draw strength
There's nothing for you I wouldn't do
                       I'd go to any length

We never knew which way we'd walk
     We would just hold hands and talk
"If you don't really know where you want to go
It doesn't matter which road you take"
                       Our hearts will know

The band warms up and begins to play
     My love, how I've waited for this day
To be here with you since we took that chance
To do the one thing that we've never done. . .
                       . . . We've never danced. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



[This message has been edited by Sven (edited 05-28-2000).]
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brian madden
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1 posted 05-28-2000 05:20 AM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

"The band warms up and begins to play
My love, how I've waited for this day
To be here with you since we took that chance
To do the one thing that we've never done. .
. . . We've never danced. . ."

Sven that was wonderful, I loved the way the words flowed as I was reading it and when I got to the last line I found myself smiling.
Thank you for sharing this poem.


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2 posted 05-28-2000 08:55 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

I share Brian's thoughts Sven ... I enjoyed it right to the last line, where I found myself "smiling" ... what sweet thoughts  

Best wishes,
/Kit
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3 posted 05-28-2000 10:30 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

The anticipation of sharing a dance can be as lovely as the dance itself...this is a sweet treasure of a poem, my friend...

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


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4 posted 05-28-2000 10:42 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

What a beautiful love song! I could 'hear' it...lovely, sir!  
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5 posted 05-28-2000 10:43 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sven~
A romantic twirl around the dance floor of your heart is such a treat.
You're certainly no wallflower.
I like it so much when I can hear the music playing through your writing.
~*Marge*~


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6 posted 05-28-2000 12:37 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

This captivated me from the moment I began to read.  I think perhaps you are right....our hearts know, even sometimes before our heads.
This was a beautiful read Sven.

Marina


[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 05-28-2000).]
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7 posted 05-28-2000 12:52 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

ah...Sveetie, this is the best way...anticipation...lucky lady, yours..
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8 posted 05-28-2000 01:49 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Sven...
I ADORE this poem...
you shine in its sweet devotion and anticipation.
it is so wonderful to see the things
this love inspires in you my friend.
later-romantic-gator
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Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
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9 posted 05-28-2000 04:09 PM       View Profile for traveling heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for traveling heart

This is a very beautiful tribute to someone that sounds very special to you...

I hope she knows how lucky she is. I bet she does, how could she not?

Very beautiful indeed...
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10 posted 05-28-2000 04:16 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very nice Sven...I see you are eagerly looking forward to that first dance.  James
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11 posted 05-28-2000 05:34 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you all my friends...

Brian, thank you. . . it's my pleasure to share with you. . .

Kit, glad that you liked. . . always nice to bring a smile. . .

Claire, I hope that this dance is wonderful. . .thank you my friend. . .

deVine, you can hear it because the band is warming up. . . (:  thank you. . .

Marge, keep listening. . . (;

Marina, thank you. . . and yes, sometimes, you just know. . .

serenity, yes, it is the best way sometimes. . .

Janet-gator, glad that you liked. . . and I thank you so much. . .

Traveling Heart, welcome to Passions!!  And thank you very much. . .

James, the band is ready. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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12 posted 05-28-2000 07:30 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Ahhhhhh Sven I hope when you two finally dance, it is all you both dreamed it would be.  You are a romantic to the core my friend  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


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Ok Mister....
You really are a romantic through and through!
Oh how that first Dance will be *sigh* just
wonderful!
Way to go my friend!  


 ~Sheri
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Oh Sven the bands playing for you and your love...go dance  
Lovely poem sven, great expression.
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe


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15 posted 05-29-2000 11:14 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Isis,
     I hope so too. . . but I still need some lessons!  

Irie,
     yes, I really am this way, always have been. . . always will be. . . thank you my friend. . .

tracie,
       yes, I hear them. . . but it's not time yet. . .like I told Isis, I still need some lessons. . .

Thank you all. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Oh Sven....

no lessons needed...just take her in your arms, feel the music, enjoy the closeness and it will happen!

Wait a minute....that sorta' sounds like something else, huh ?

Well, the feelings are almost the same...you can't go wrong. Just hold each other to the sound of the music!!

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17 posted 06-06-2000 05:15 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Sven to hold her is the most blissful feeling in my life though I fear her response as I've felt. She creates so many sensations in me and makes me stare at her. I guess when we meet now we'll dance.
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18 posted 06-06-2000 07:58 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Wow!!!!!!!I loved it,Sven,That 's what I feel right now.I've friend who's more than a friend too.I wanted to tell these feeling to him.But I couldn't.But your poem makes me smile.
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Oh Sven, What a lovely poem. I hope she is half as sweet as you. Remember, stay AWAY from that pack of wolves. (smile). Really enjoy your music.  Marcy
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Thank you all. . .

Magnolia, yeah, it does sound like something else!!  LOL     Now, how do those steps go again?

Amazon, dance the night away my friend. ..

vandana, it comes from the heart. . . just show your heart and let the rest follow. . .

Alle'cram, thank you. . . and believe me, the wolves I have learned to stay away from!!  Thank you again!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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21 posted 06-07-2000 12:50 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~Sven
oh you captured my heart
with this one dear friend! gosh
how i adore your writing! you are
for sure the ever romantic! you are
as hopeless as me lol...and i mean
that in a good way. i hope this
"dance" is all you anticipated and
more. wishing you lots of love &
luck m'friend!
take care,
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



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Oh my I almost missed this one.....Glad I didn't.  This fits so well of my life with one woman I know.....Its so real and true.  Enjoyed it more than I should I think  

 It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone.

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Sven, you do it again such lovely poetry
~ a dance of hearts ~
Coco  
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24 posted 06-09-2000 04:55 AM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

Eek! this one almost slipped through the net, but I'm glad I saw it there! Once again you excel brave Sir Sven. Now where did that thinking cap go? You are a true inspiration  

Eric.
 
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