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redheart angrybraids
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The unwashed eyes found the laughing wings.
Their claws aching,
silky.
And silky sex
maddend, thoughtless,
love and laughter
found touch.
Hot and open,
where your hand passing
chills our delicious core.
Blackness pretends to fall in my nighted chair, and on my hour pillow.
One and one
above the stars
cannot light me.
© Copyright 2000 Amelia A. Ensign - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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The unwashed eyes found the laughing wings.
Their claws aching,
silky.
And silky sex
maddend, thoughtless,
love and laughter
found touch.
Hot and open,
where your hand passing
chills our delicious core.
Blackness pretends to fall in my nighted chair, and on my hour pillow.
One and one
above the stars
cannot light me.

Oh dark and passionate, an interesting poem.
haunting, enjoyed reading this one. great images.



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Your use of imagery is what drew me to this poem, though I am not sure what you mean to convey. Nonetheless, I enjoyed this.  
 
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