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redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
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honolulu, hawaii

0 posted 2000-05-28 02:30 AM


The unwashed eyes found the laughing wings.
Their claws aching,
silky.
And silky sex
maddend, thoughtless,
love and laughter
found touch.
Hot and open,
where your hand passing
chills our delicious core.
Blackness pretends to fall in my nighted chair, and on my hour pillow.
One and one
above the stars
cannot light me.

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brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
1 posted 2000-05-28 05:30 AM


The unwashed eyes found the laughing wings.
Their claws aching,
silky.
And silky sex
maddend, thoughtless,
love and laughter
found touch.
Hot and open,
where your hand passing
chills our delicious core.
Blackness pretends to fall in my nighted chair, and on my hour pillow.
One and one
above the stars
cannot light me.

Oh dark and passionate, an interesting poem.
haunting, enjoyed reading this one. great images.



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"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
Douglas Adams.

"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Do not listen to a word I say
Just listen to what I can keep silent"

Nicky Wire


Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-05-28 10:44 AM


Your use of imagery is what drew me to this poem, though I am not sure what you mean to convey. Nonetheless, I enjoyed this.  
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