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Two Lovers Met

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Elizabeth Santos
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Two Lovers Met

Two lovers met one summer night
Enchantment filled this tender sight
They came to meet as in a dream
As I sat still beside the stream

A little moonbeam softly dropped
On whispering stream and there it stopped
And in contentment stayed to rest
Upon the water’s gentle crest

The water murmured out of love
And only I and stars above
Were witness to the splendor there
This tender meeting of the lovely pair

Elizabeth Santos
© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 05-28-2000 01:07 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, Elizabeth~
What a joyful little poem.
I just love it.
Your muses are a happy bunch this day !
Great big hugs of delight ! !
~*Marge*~


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Mike
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2 posted 05-28-2000 01:09 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Nicely written.  Such a nice flow and sentiment.
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3 posted 05-28-2000 01:19 AM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Elizabeth,...how lovely a little poem you have here.  Such a nice one to read.  It put a soft smile on my face and a calm and gentle feeling inside.  Thank you mam. *Peace.
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4 posted 05-28-2000 01:38 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Elizabeth, what a Joy it is to read your poetry! Thank you.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
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5 posted 05-28-2000 09:45 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This just flowed with gentle romanticism ... wonderful Elizabeth!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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6 posted 05-28-2000 10:28 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

wow!

 Kathleen
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David2
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7 posted 05-28-2000 10:32 AM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

Elizabeth,
   I agree qwith therest, this is very gentle and sweet. I liked it.
                David2
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8 posted 05-28-2000 04:48 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Superb Liz, I couldn't have said it better myself. . .

Just wonderful. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 05-28-2000 04:59 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Everyone's comment is exactly the same, so I can give a big collective thank you to all you romantic souls.
I appreciate the comments
Liz
Martie
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10 posted 05-28-2000 05:43 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Liz--here's an added "sigh" from me.
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*sigh and a smile*  oooh, so lovely...I could picture this beautifully.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~The darkest midnight is only a prelude to the most enrapturing dawn~

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12 posted 05-29-2000 12:14 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Hey Liz!

What the heck have you been smokin'?
Can I get some of that?

LOL

Lovely writing Liz, Beautifully done

 All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep


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13 posted 05-29-2000 12:32 AM       View Profile for Alina Le Ann   Email Alina Le Ann   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Alina Le Ann's Home Page   View IP for Alina Le Ann

This is very picture perfect!
I look forward to reading more of your poems!

Alina Le Ann
Elizabeth Santos
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14 posted 05-29-2000 12:44 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Thank you all, each and every one, for your comments to this little poem
Liz
 
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