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~Fallen Angel~

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Janet Marie
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0 posted 05-27-2000 11:27 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Janet Marie

even an angel sometimes falters
even an angel sometimes fails
when the wind beneath her wings dies
when the wind ceases to carry her sails

an angel's wings are fragile
sometimes they fray and tear
sometimes an angel gets lost
drowning in all the despair

an angel's heart is open
but there is only so much it can take
she loves you more than her last breath
this gift of fate you should not forsake

can you hear an angel calling
do you hear her lonely cries
do you know she needs you to hold her
do you know in you she lives and dies

will you hold on to her love
can you hear the song she sings
will you still love a fallen angel
or will you take away her wings

for DeVante' with love,
always know I am keeping my promises



 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


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Janet Marie
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1 posted 05-27-2000 11:32 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Hi my poet friends...
I may have to go out of town for a few days...
Im still waiting on word...
just wanted to wish you all a safe and relaxing holiday weekend and i will be back soon (IF i do go) and get caught up on these poems I do so love to read.
Hopefully that will be tomorrow morn  
I do so love starting my day with a passion fixx *smile*
take care all
love ya jm
***************
5/28
NEVER MIND  LOL  I dont have to leave YEAH!!!! now I can play in Passions!!!


[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 05-28-2000).]
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 05-27-2000 11:37 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

JanetMarie~
Lovely thoughts of angel wings.
Have a good trip IF you do go.
If not ... read lots of good poetry.
That should 'fixx' ya' up !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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brian madden
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3 posted 05-28-2000 04:46 AM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

but there is only so much it can take
she loves you more than her last breath
this gift of fate you should not forsake"

I believe we are all angels waiting to be released. Some of us have the feeling that we are angels
while others are born knowing, I believe you of are one of those who was born knowing.
You poems and e-mails bring a ray of light every day.

"will you hold on to her love
can you hear the song she sings
will you still love a fallen angel
or will you take away her wings"

An angel will always be an angel no matter what form she takes.
Her actions bring hope and joy to those around,
Giving them a little piece of heaven.

A beautiful poem.


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"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
Douglas Adams.

"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Do not listen to a word I say
Just listen to what I can keep silent"

Nicky Wire

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 05-28-2000 09:22 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

The saddest sound is that of an angel "falling" ... lovely verse Janet Marie, sweet and sorrowful ...

Best wishes,
/Kit
ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 05-28-2000 12:05 PM       View Profile for ellie LeJeune   Email ellie LeJeune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ellie LeJeune

Dearest Jan; How I love this poem.How many times I have been that fallen Angel! Still I know that my Beloved will forgive and forget all.
You, dear friend, have been an Angel in my life, fallen or otherwise!
Thanks again for your loveliest of commments to the sonnet. Go see what I replied to your reply! I do treasure you as my friend!
Love, Ellie

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6 posted 05-28-2000 01:02 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Janet Marie--been keeping yourself "a-mused" have ya?  smiles and hugs to you---now tell ya what, e me a verse and we'll ping pong a bit and see what we come up with...love to you...
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7 posted 05-28-2000 04:53 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Jan,
    angels may fall. . . but they always seem to know how to come back. . .

Great poem. . . have a great weekend!!

Later angel-gator. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

JamesMichael
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8 posted 05-28-2000 05:18 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"Do you know she needs you to hold her
do you know in you she lives and dies."
Magnificant poetry...hope your angel wings are in good shape Baby girl Janet.....James
devina
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9 posted 05-28-2000 11:43 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

You've written some awesome lines here girl!!! Angels can't always be perfect right??   Loved the whole idea!!! Take care!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

poetFemmeFatale
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10 posted 05-28-2000 11:48 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Janet, this reminds me of a beautiful country song I've heard...about a man who beats his woman down, yet she flies even with a broken wing, so beautifully.  I'm not sure who sings it, but I do hope to find out.  This was written from deep within, I can tell.  Very emotional piece from a beautiful angel herself.....   Fly girl...you can do it!  Love you!

 "Fantasies enrich our lives to the fullest, but true satisfaction comes from creating your own story in the real world! Live out your fantasies & make a storybook with beautiful pictures for the world to enjoy! -poetFemme

Janet Marie
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11 posted 05-29-2000 09:11 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

thank you all--each of you-- for your beautiful comments and sweet replies.
You warm this "angels" heart...
brian, ellie, SBJ,and gen, TY...I feel like i can fly with those wonderful words.


me being called an angel has become a sweet joke here at home...
my daughter says to tell anyone who deems me an angel...
"THATS BECAUSE THEY DONT HAVE TO LIVE WITH YOU" LOL  

ahhh...from the mouths of babes.

take care all
me loves ya,
jm


 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Parker
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12 posted 05-29-2000 11:21 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Janet, this is very lovely, from the heart of an angel...... well ah, temptress angel anyway.....  
Very nicely done.

Parker
 
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