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~Fallen Angel~
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~Fallen Angel~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
even an angel sometimes falters even an angel sometimes fails when the wind beneath her wings dies when the wind ceases to carry her sails an angel's wings are fragile sometimes they fray and tear sometimes an angel gets lost drowning in all the despair an angel's heart is open but there is only so much it can take she loves you more than her last breath this gift of fate you should not forsake can you hear an angel calling do you hear her lonely cries do you know she needs you to hold her do you know in you she lives and dies will you hold on to her love can you hear the song she sings will you still love a fallen angel or will you take away her wings for DeVante' with love, always know I am keeping my promises Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hi my poet friends... I may have to go out of town for a few days... Im still waiting on word... just wanted to wish you all a safe and relaxing holiday weekend and i will be back soon (IF i do go) and get caught up on these poems I do so love to read. Hopefully that will be tomorrow morn  I do so love starting my day with a passion fixx *smile* take care all love ya jm *************** 5/28 NEVER MIND LOL I dont have to leave YEAH!!!! now I can play in Passions!!! [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 05-28-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ Lovely thoughts of angel wings. Have a good trip IF you do go. If not ... read lots of good poetry. That should 'fixx' ya' up ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
but there is only so much it can take she loves you more than her last breath this gift of fate you should not forsake" I believe we are all angels waiting to be released. Some of us have the feeling that we are angels while others are born knowing, I believe you of are one of those who was born knowing. You poems and e-mails bring a ray of light every day. "will you hold on to her love can you hear the song she sings will you still love a fallen angel or will you take away her wings" An angel will always be an angel no matter what form she takes. Her actions bring hope and joy to those around, Giving them a little piece of heaven. A beautiful poem. ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Do not listen to a word I say Just listen to what I can keep silent" Nicky Wire |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
The saddest sound is that of an angel "falling" ... lovely verse Janet Marie, sweet and sorrowful ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dearest Jan; How I love this poem.How many times I have been that fallen Angel! Still I know that my Beloved will forgive and forget all. You, dear friend, have been an Angel in my life, fallen or otherwise! Thanks again for your loveliest of commments to the sonnet. Go see what I replied to your reply! I do treasure you as my friend! Love, Ellie 02 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Janet Marie--been keeping yourself "a-mused" have ya? smiles and hugs to you---now tell ya what, e me a verse and we'll ping pong a bit and see what we come up with...love to you... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Jan, angels may fall. . . but they always seem to know how to come back. . . Great poem. . . have a great weekend!! Later angel-gator. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Do you know she needs you to hold her do you know in you she lives and dies." Magnificant poetry...hope your angel wings are in good shape Baby girl Janet.....James |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've written some awesome lines here girl!!! Angels can't always be perfect right?? Loved the whole idea!!! Take care!!!Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Janet, this reminds me of a beautiful country song I've heard...about a man who beats his woman down, yet she flies even with a broken wing, so beautifully. I'm not sure who sings it, but I do hope to find out. This was written from deep within, I can tell. Very emotional piece from a beautiful angel herself..... Fly girl...you can do it! Love you!"Fantasies enrich our lives to the fullest, but true satisfaction comes from creating your own story in the real world! Live out your fantasies & make a storybook with beautiful pictures for the world to enjoy! -poetFemme |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
thank you all--each of you-- for your beautiful comments and sweet replies. You warm this "angels" heart... brian, ellie, SBJ,and gen, TY...I feel like i can fly with those wonderful words. me being called an angel has become a sweet joke here at home... my daughter says to tell anyone who deems me an angel... "THATS BECAUSE THEY DONT HAVE TO LIVE WITH YOU" LOL  ahhh...from the mouths of babes. take care all me loves ya, jm Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Janet, this is very lovely, from the heart of an angel...... well ah, temptress angel anyway..... Very nicely done. Parker |
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