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Arrow Of Love

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Lorraine Nisbet
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Arrow Of Love

My name is cupid
my arrow's in flight
my missle of love
will reach two people tonight.
My weapon returns
with two names
I know they will never
be the same.
When I see them smile
my heart delights
to see their eyes sparkle
with loves flight.
For they will fly
ever so high
their hearts will reach
up to the sky.
They will soar forever
it will only feel like a day
because it is true love
their love will stay.
My mission is accomplished
so I must go
to find two more special people
and let my arrow flow.

~Lorraine Nisbet~


                        
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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 05-27-2000 11:26 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lorraine~
Well, how cute !
You little Cupid, you !
~*Marge*~


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Sudhir Iyer
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Cupid's arrow strikes, my patience is wearing thin...

Lorraine, nice poem, this is for sure...

regards, sudhir

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That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.
Kit McCallum
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This was charming Lorraine ... you never know where he'll strike!  Nice work ...

Best wishes,
/Kit
Lorraine Nisbet
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Hi, Marge, sudhir and Kit!

I must say I had the most fun writing this piece.  Thank you all for the nice replies.

~Lorraine
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I hope your friend cupid could shoot a few arrows towards me and Lena...and please don't miss her cause you already got me cupid.  James
Lorraine Nisbet
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James,

I put in a few good words to my friend cupid for you...good luck.

~Lorraine

 
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Bessy41
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I like the style, very imagintive and creative!!  )~
Lorraine Nisbet
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Hi, Bessy!

Happy to meet you.  You are too kind.  I thank you very much.  

~Lorraine

 
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