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Angel`Fox
Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 32
Ottawa, Ontario Canada

0 posted 2000-05-27 07:47 PM



Love

I see the world completely different now
Ever since you said those four words to me
"I love you Julie"
My heart skipped a beat
I can't breathe
Oh my god, he loves me!!
Could this be true?
Could you truly love me?
I am grateful I have met you
For where would my life be?
Without your love in me, for me
I am so complete now,
You my love
Are my knight,
I treasure, cherish and love you
And never want to be apart
So lock the door and throw away the key
Baby your stuck with me
For eternity
Even that is not enough time
For you and me

By Angel`Fox
05-26-2000
at 12:34am


 @}>*+~^ Angel`Fox ^~+*<{@

{~._.~}
_( Y )_
()~*~()
(_)-(_)

"Love seeketh not itself to please
Nor for itself hath any care,
But for another gives its ease,
And builds a heaven in hell's despair"


© Copyright 2000 Julie Charlebois - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

1 posted 2000-05-27 09:11 PM


Beautiful Angel-fox  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)



Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-05-28 11:11 AM


Wow ... he sounds pretty special AngelFox, nicely said.

Best wishes,
/Kit

brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
3 posted 2000-05-28 03:12 PM


that is what love is, it is pretty powerful stuff. I think it should come with a warning
like:
MAY CAUSE YOU TO LOSE ALL SENSE OF REASON

MAY CAUSE YOU TO BREAK INTO SONG FOR NO REASON, OR TO CRY OR SMILE EVERYTHING YOU HEAR A CHEESY LOVE SONG.

MAY CAUSE YOU TO HAPPY ALL THE TIME

treasure, cherish and love you
And never want to be apart
So lock the door and throw away the key
Baby your stuck with me
For eternity
Even that is not enough time
For you and me

a lovely poem, sweet.




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"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
Douglas Adams.

"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Do not listen to a word I say
Just listen to what I can keep silent"

Nicky Wire


Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
4 posted 2000-05-29 01:49 PM


An Angel with wings of love so wonderful to see, may you fight as high as can be.

Love,  Cerenity

David2
Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407

5 posted 2000-05-29 06:28 PM


Angel Fox,
    Yes, love is wonderful! Your poem was very upbeat and moving. I enjoyed it. Thanks,
                david2

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