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Destroyed Utopia |
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Rhavin Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 28 |
Our utopia that ended in lies That is why my soul cries Your grace that enchanted me from the start Is now what sends pains of agony to my heart I still long for you to give me a loving touch Yet the hate I feel is stronger if not by much The confusion of feelings twist my soul The spot in my chest that love stems from is now a dark hole How much longer can this torment last Love and hate flow from this loss of love gash I'm not sure if I can emotionally survive But with the loss of my soulmate I don't want to be alive |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you've expressed well the torn & tormented emotional state a person experiences when losing a love... good thing it's temporary... people are very resilient and... there are hundreds of thousands of potential 'soulmates' welcome to passions! I'll look forward to reading more |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh,...ouch. This one is so full of pain. I'm sorry. Great expression of emotions though. *Hang in there. *Peace. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I still long for you to give me a loving touch." You have expressed the sorrow of love very well. James |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Rhavin, I feel for you if this is indeed a personal statement. Youd words are ful of distraught emotion. David2  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've expressed yourself well in this Rhavin ... take heart that there will be brighter days ahead. Best wishes, /Kit |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
It always hurts to lose the one you love, but if this person is your soulmate, they will be back. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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