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lucky
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0 posted 05-27-2000 03:31 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lucky

Drifting  

away

[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 06-01-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Dale W. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 05-27-2000 03:36 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This is a treasure Lucky ... beautifully written, and brought a tear to my eye just reading.  Lovely and heart-felt writing ...

Best wishes,
/Kit
lucky
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2 posted 05-27-2000 03:53 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Thank you Kit,

Just wanted to say I ckecked out your office... must say it's a LOT cleaner than ours. Good work...



 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)
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3 posted 05-27-2000 06:07 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Lucky,...wow.  This is a very emotionally powerful piece.  Thank you for sharing it...it's such a heartfelt tribute.  Give Rosemary a hug from me.  Take care.
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4 posted 05-28-2000 03:33 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lucky~
What a sentimental softie you are.
You've honored Rosemary and her parents with this lovely piece.
You're a 'good' guy !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Martie
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5 posted 05-28-2000 05:41 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

lucky, you have the sweetest love, and those who have you in their lives, are blessed.  Very powerful heart pull for me in your words.  Hugs to you both!
Janet Marie
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6 posted 05-28-2000 11:00 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Lucky
this poem touches me in more ways than I could express here.
what a truly amazing poem this is,
not only for its words,
but the love and tribute behind it ...
and the kind soul and heart that shine in it.
50 years...now thats amazing
take care, jm


 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Dark Angel
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7 posted 05-29-2000 04:46 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

A beautiful and heartfelt tribute Lucky...Well Done.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


 
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