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Life's Songs |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Life's Songs ~*Marge Tindal*~ Life sings of us the songs of mirth The sweetest song life-giving birth Aria of our youth sung in sweet surprise Within our hearts soon harmonized Sings of us through all our days Joyous melodies sung with praise Melody of hearts so tender Pitch us now in sweet surrender Song of another pierces our soul Singing love until we're old Life sings of us sweet lullabies Kisses us softly then says goodbye Within a heart our song returning Hummed now in a heart of mourning It matters much the song life sings Caught in the joy of remembering Life sings of us sweet lullabies Kisses us softly then says goodbye ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lily121 Junior Member
since 2000-05-23
Posts 24 |
Very moving. Songs can be sad, happy, angry,a ny mood. They can say hi or bye also. Very nice poem. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
"Life sings of us sweet lullabies Kisses us softly then says goodbye" a beautiful poem, I often find that music can amplify my mood. Just like poetry, and your poem has made me even happier than before I read it.  ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Do not listen to a word I say Just listen to what I can keep silent" Nicky Wire |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Your poetry does sing of nature, or life. Wonderful poem (but then, what else do you create) |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
This is realy beautiful and moving....hope to be reading more of your work in Open. Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This poem floats like a sweet, sweet lullaby itself, tracing birth to remembrance and ending ... beautifully written and song-like Marge! Best wishes, /Kit |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Marge; This does read like a song, itself. lovely singing here! Ellie 02 |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lily~ Yes, the songs of life on sweet reply, often bring such lullabies. Thanks. BrianM~ Our songs do indeed 'amplify' life. Thank you. Mike~ 'Wonderful' from you - creates a happy me. Salooma~ Oh, my dear - you will find my heart at home in Open ... Thank you. Kit~ Ahhhh ! It is sung from my heart. Glad you recognize the tune. Ellie~ Think it'll make the Pop-Charts ?  Thank you, dear. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely! And so true...but does singing off key mean my life is off center?  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine~ Hmmmmmm ! I think it means I'm glad Ron hasn't added sound to the site ! Thanks, ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh Mom---you do sing like a bird...and I caught myself humming a bit, and so surprised...you are such good medicine, Marge...(HUG) |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, if life sings us so many songs, I guess that's why there are so many "grammys". Love your work....as always |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity, my child~ I do love singing ... and I hum the memory of friends. Thanks, love. Balladeer~ I'm glad you enjoyed. I'm not a granny yet !  (Oh, ... you said GRAMMY !) Yeah ... makes sense to me. Love you .... and it figures that a Balladeer would like a poem about songs. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very true Marge, and your poetry are life's songs, just beautiful. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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angelsamongus Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 70New York |
~Marge~ I really enjoyed this. It has such a sweet message and wonderful rhythm. You are very talented! (Once the kiddies get in bed I am going to spend some more time tonight reading all the wonderful words and thoughts here) Blessings, Lori |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I see yet another depth to your writing!!! Kathleen indy31_99@yahoo.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ Just love your singing. This poem gives great messages, you are such a sweet singer Miss Marge Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Witch's Brat Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 100 |
A song can mean so many different things, depending on the mood...so can life's songs! Perfectly in tune, Marge. WB |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ Gosh, thanks ! I'm glad this has been so well-received ... I was just humming the memories of a friend when it jumped into my heart this morning. Lori~ Why, thank you so much. You will find a cornucopia of talent within these walls of Passion's. Kiss the kiddies goodnight for me. Kathleen~ I'm gonna take that a gigantic compliment. THANK YOU. Tracie~ Well, my heart carries the tune of many. Wind me up and I'll belt ya' out song for sure. Thanks, sweetie.Witch'sBrat~ Life does sing us each a different tune. Thanks for singing with me. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Life sings of us sweet lullabies Kisses us softly then says goodbye ~~~~~~ ~Marge~, this is beautiful... Enjoyed this one very much... regards, sudhir. Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Marge~ What a beautiful song you have sung. Love it!!! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ I'm so pleased you found it beautiful. Thank you for thinking so. Lorraine~ Thank you. Life lets me sing along ... humming as I write. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Marge, I hear your songs of love in the air, for God blessed you with an abundence of love to share with the world in the form of poetry that is sweet music to the ears. Love, Cerenity |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
You got me singing right along with ya, Marge! This is a really lovely poem... how beautifully you capture life's song in it. Truly wonderful. I love ya Marge! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ Such a sweetie you are ... we're all joined in joyous singing .... let's rock the world with our song. Lil' Lizzie~ You too ? Well, I can just hear our melodious tunes all around the world. Love ya', babe ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Fantastic work Marge, as usual. We should all rejoice in the song of life. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Much joy and sadness here, Marge, so beautifully written, my friend! Corinne |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Yes, songs are a great part of our lives, and they often make some of the best moments of our lives. Sometimes, I don't know what I would do without my music. Listening to great artists, or playing it on the piano. A wonderful reminder, Marge. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, This is so "you" and that's what makes it so beautiful Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ Rejoicing in song is a good thing. Remembering those who made the melodies hum, is a necessary thing. Corinne~ I could just {{HUG}} you ! Yes, there are songs to be sung, joy to be had ... and humming the memories. Thank you soooooo much for understanding my heart. LoveBug~ I'm so glad you enjoy the music of life. Be happy, dear. Lizzie, my friend~ You know the songs my heart has sung .. and has yet to sing. Thank you for recognizing the tune. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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