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Moment Meant To Be

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Rose Petal
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0 posted 05-27-2000 12:42 AM       View Profile for Rose Petal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rose Petal

As I got out of the car,
I could see his eyes stare at me,
Walking toward me from a distance,
This moment meant to be,

Closer he came,
My heart beating faster with every step,
This chemistry I felt as first time strangers,
Was all together perfect,

I looked into his eyes of green,
So beautiful and sexy,
His smile back at me,
This moment meant to be,

Can I help you ma'am,
Was his reply,
I was in a trance looking into his eyes,
He took my list and checked every item on it,

As I made a flirty reply,
Hey I don't think that would fit in my car,
He laughed and said, I don't think it will either,
I will cut it for you, to make you feel better,

So he took the board from my hand,
My hand touched his,
Pure bliss from this moment of a brief touch,
How I watched his every move to be near me,
This moment was meant to be,

I watched as he cut the boards perfectly to impress,
Doing all this for my happiness,
I could watch every move of his hands, his body,
Moving, working so precise,knowing I was wathcing him,

He began to grin, that innocent sexy smile,
As he came back and handed them to me,
I said thank you, he said your more than welcome,
This moment was meant to be,

I knew it was ending fast,
The moment had come to pass,
So I asked?
You could come and swing?
He smiled at me without bother,
And said I might take you up on that offer,

I got in my car, and drove away,
This small moment, had made my day,
I smiled all the way home,
Thinking of him, our small moment together,
The chemisty we both felt,

How his eyes, his smile made me melt,
I will never forget this time,
I had to buy a board for the swing in the tree,
I know this moment was meant to be!





[This message has been edited by Rose Petal (edited 05-27-2000).]
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lucky
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1 posted 05-27-2000 02:10 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Nice,

takes me back a day or two... Yeah... maybe two or so... Nice feeling my friend... looks like you've captured it pretty well. And welcome to you also.



 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)
CocoBaci
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2 posted 05-27-2000 03:39 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

So sweeeeeet this poem
  
Coco


[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 05-27-2000).]
Mike
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3 posted 05-27-2000 08:07 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Nicely written.  Enjoyed your poetry.
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4 posted 05-27-2000 08:21 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

RosePetal~
Welcome to the 'posting' side of Passion's.
Enjoyed the read.
Hope to see more to follow.
~*Marge*~


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Salooma
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5 posted 05-27-2000 08:24 AM       View Profile for Salooma   Email Salooma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Salooma

Welcome to Passions....what a wonderful post...shows the power of love at first sight. Thanks for sharing.

Salma

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Kit McCallum
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6 posted 05-27-2000 08:24 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

You've described the intimate chemistry of strangers well Rose Petal ... I enjoyed this ... welcome to Passions!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Poet deVine
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7 posted 05-27-2000 09:29 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family. Check your email for a special welcome. I loved your poem, and the story was great, brought a smile to my face.  
Rose Petal
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8 posted 05-27-2000 05:19 PM       View Profile for Rose Petal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rose Petal

I was weary at first..but  I  am not as nervous  as before with all the friendly replies, thank you!
Rhavin
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9 posted 05-27-2000 06:56 PM       View Profile for Rhavin   Email Rhavin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rhavin

Very nicely written.  I don't believe in love at first sight, but your poem really had me feeling strongly about the possiblity of meeting a special someone that might make my pulse race, and chemistry flow.  I hope to see more of your poems in the future.
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