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Silence Surrounds Me

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Holly
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0 posted 05-27-2000 12:38 AM       View Profile for Holly   Email Holly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Holly's Home Page   View IP for Holly


-Silence Surrounds Me-

the silence now surrounds me
your passionate eyes are no where to see

those comforting arms I've grown accustom to are now gone
my emotions have crashed from feeling so alive & fullfilled to completely alone

how I miss those precious lips to kiss
and how I long to be wrapped in your quilt of love once again
you filled so many holes in my heart and helped it start to mend

now my mind is stuck in the past
missing, wanting, longing, and wondering how I could have made this last

I long to have you again, to hold, to kiss, to taste, to smell, to completely inhale you into my whole being
but for now the silence surrounds me
my heart now imprisoned--never to be free


 I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.
Michel de Montaigne
© Copyright 2000 Holly - All Rights Reserved
insect
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1 posted 05-27-2000 01:27 AM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

Very beautiful poem!
Don't worry someone will
find the key to your heart
and set you free.

~And how I long to be wrapped in your quilt of love once again~
That's just so heart warming.
CocoBaci
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2 posted 05-27-2000 03:43 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Holly, you've captured emotions well in this poem you've shared.  It made me sigh ..
Coco
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3 posted 05-27-2000 05:53 AM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

how I miss those precious lips to kiss
and how I long to be wrapped in your quilt of love once again
you filled so many holes in my heart and helped it start to mend
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It is hard when love goes cold, but hang in there. Maybe the person was not the right one for you. What ever you decide take care and don't let the pain take over your life. a
very emotional poem, thanks for sharing,

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4 posted 05-27-2000 09:23 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Ah, a very sad poem. I hope the silence ends soon.  
Kit McCallum
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5 posted 05-27-2000 09:30 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

You penned your heart-wrenching emotions well Holly ... a lovely and expressive verse!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Holly
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6 posted 05-27-2000 09:57 AM       View Profile for Holly   Email Holly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Holly's Home Page   View IP for Holly

Thanks for all the response. It's so nice to bounce things off of you guys.    

Poet de Vine-I too hope the slience ends soon.

Coco-thanks for reading and sighing along with me.

Brian-Well maybe he is the right one and just not the correc timing..odd thing. I guess the absense will, in time, tell the truth on this subject. THANKS!  

Kit-well it's nice to know someone else has these emotions lately. Sorry you are feeling them too though. Hope it gets better for you also.

Insect-I appreciate the thought of the key..hmmm, maybe someone will. I think it helps if you expose the lock from time to time...LOL.

thanks again,
-Holly


 I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.  
  Michel de Montaigne


[This message has been edited by Holly (edited 05-27-2000).]
 
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