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redheart angrybraids
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0 posted 05-27-2000 12:35 AM       View Profile for redheart angrybraids   Email redheart angrybraids   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for redheart angrybraids

The unwashed eyes
found the laughing wings.
Their claws aching,
silky.
Man's soft prey
entrails the ugly end.


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jeffbrowning
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1 posted 05-30-2000 05:37 PM       View Profile for jeffbrowning   Email jeffbrowning   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jeffbrowning

Very Interesting... would love to know what spawned this.  Could it be a description of suicide?  Not sure... It provoked much thought.  Quite a journey.  Thanks.
JOY 14
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2 posted 05-30-2000 07:42 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

love the description of unwashed eyes!
redheart angrybraids
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3 posted 06-07-2000 02:56 AM       View Profile for redheart angrybraids   Email redheart angrybraids   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redheart angrybraids

there is no meaning of suicide, they are just a scramble of words. laughing wings, we are laughing, our spirits survive, are claws, our hands are aching, through all that we endure, good and hard, silky, because we are naturally, passionate, entrailing the ugly end, we as human beings are the only animal that runes its own enviroment, we are within our own end, surviving, laughter.
kindly,
redheart angrybraids


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