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redheart angrybraids
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0 posted 2000-05-27 12:35 PM


The unwashed eyes
found the laughing wings.
Their claws aching,
silky.
Man's soft prey
entrails the ugly end.


[This message has been edited by redheart angrybraids (edited 05-28-2000).]
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jeffbrowning
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since 2000-05-25
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1 posted 2000-05-30 05:37 PM


Very Interesting... would love to know what spawned this.  Could it be a description of suicide?  Not sure... It provoked much thought.  Quite a journey.  Thanks.
JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
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2 posted 2000-05-30 07:42 PM


love the description of unwashed eyes!

redheart angrybraids
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3 posted 2000-06-07 02:56 AM


there is no meaning of suicide, they are just a scramble of words. laughing wings, we are laughing, our spirits survive, are claws, our hands are aching, through all that we endure, good and hard, silky, because we are naturally, passionate, entrailing the ugly end, we as human beings are the only animal that runes its own enviroment, we are within our own end, surviving, laughter.
kindly,
redheart angrybraids


[This message has been edited by redheart angrybraids (edited 06-07-2000).]

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