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~*My Forever*~ (second try here)
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~*My Forever*~ (second try here) |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Emerald eyes lay closed to light As a final sigh falls soundless In yesterday lay earthen dreams Untouched by silvered bliss. Water shimmers beneath my feet As in eternity I wade My angels bathed in misty white I see in distant shade. Upon a stream of billowing blue I soar among the stars Lavender clouds enrapture me As they whisper from afar. My lover lays upon the grass That sways beneath my feet With golden grace I fall to him And once more our souls do meet. A breathy wish comes from my lips And around us roses climb Here within his tender embrace My forever is sublime. *Krista Knutson* ~Upon pearled wing love's fantasy takes flight~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
My goodness this poem is great ~ captivating and breathtaking  Coco |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
((sigh)) what a beautiful and romantic poem you have written here and I really loved the line: Lavender clouds enrapture me As they whisper from afar This is beautiful Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
wonderfully written. enjoyed. |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Wow.....what abeautiful poem that truely paints a picture. Very nice.... Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderfully romantic and picturesque ... I enjoyed this! Lovely poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista~ Simply lovely thoughts cascade across the page ... writ from the inkwell of your heart. Enjoyed muchly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Krista, Classical, romantic, lovely...each time I am able to read one of your poems I see such promising poetic growth...you are cooking, my dear! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
What everyone else said and then some... Simply lovely. Very well done. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
me thinks me needs some K, contacts... or some K, rose colored glasses.. cause K's eyes see only beauty. the view thru K's, eyes is DIVINE... as is this exceptional poem... you are amazing my friend. jm Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Emerald eyes lay closed to light As a final sigh falls soundless In yesterday lay earthen dreams Untouched by silvered bliss. WOW BEAUTIFUL. sounds like Heaven to me, stunning poem. ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Do not listen to a word I say Just listen to what I can keep silent" Nicky Wire |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Coco- Thank you very much! tracie- I have a thing about lavender....I absolutely adore the color. Thank you very much! Mike- Thanks! Salooma- Thank you too! Kit- Glad you enjoyed! Marge- I am honored to have you reply, as always. I do believe you are right when you say this was written from 'the inkwell' of my heart. Ms. deVine- Thank ya much! Meadowmuse- I'm cooking, eh? well, thats a good sign I believe! Maybe someday I'll have as much talent as you! allan- Thank you. JM- This K girl has lavender colored glasses actually...  Thank you so much for your lovely reply, my friend...I am blushing thats for sure. brian- Yep, that's what I was going for...this is what my heaven would be like. Thank you! *Krista Knutson* ~Upon pearled wing love's fantasy takes flight~ |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
hehehhhe.... two in one weekend! Wonderful. I bet you can't guess which line was my fav?? well, probably, but I'll tell you anyways..."Upon a stream of billowing blue I soar among the stars Lavender clouds enrapture me As they whisper from afar." Yay! "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
You paint a vivid scene interwoven with feeling, Krista! I wish I had some contact to your muse and a vacation villa in one of the wonderlands you've devised. Another excellent poem, my dear friend! Abrahm Simons "Flew too high and burnt the wing Lost my faith in everything" - Trent Reznor, "Somewhat Damaged" |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank ya very much Abey and Cassers. *Krista Knutson* ~The darkest midnight is only a prelude to the most enrapturing dawn~ |
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