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~*My Forever*~ (second try here)

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


0 posted 05-26-2000 11:33 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

Emerald eyes lay closed to light
As a final sigh falls soundless
In yesterday lay earthen dreams
Untouched by silvered bliss.

Water shimmers beneath my feet
As in eternity I wade
My angels bathed in misty white
I see in distant shade.

Upon a stream of billowing blue
I soar among the stars
Lavender clouds enrapture me
As they whisper from afar.

My lover lays upon the grass
That sways beneath my feet
With golden grace I fall to him
And once more our souls do meet.

A breathy wish comes from my lips
And around us roses climb
Here within his tender embrace
My forever is sublime.



 *Krista Knutson*

~Upon pearled wing love's fantasy takes flight~
© Copyright 2000 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
CocoBaci
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1 posted 05-27-2000 03:47 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

My goodness this poem is great ~ captivating and breathtaking

Coco
tracie66
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2 posted 05-27-2000 05:19 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

((sigh)) what a beautiful and romantic poem you have written here and I really loved the line:  Lavender clouds enrapture me
       As they whisper from afar
This is beautiful
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe


Mike
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3 posted 05-27-2000 08:18 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

wonderfully written.  enjoyed.
Salooma
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4 posted 05-27-2000 08:21 AM       View Profile for Salooma   Email Salooma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Salooma

Wow.....what abeautiful poem that truely paints a picture. Very nice....

Salma

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Kit McCallum
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5 posted 05-27-2000 08:27 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Wonderfully romantic and picturesque ... I enjoyed this!  Lovely poem!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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6 posted 05-27-2000 08:31 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Krista~
Simply lovely thoughts
cascade across the page ...
writ from the inkwell of your heart.
Enjoyed muchly.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 05-27-2000 11:04 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!  
Meadowmuse
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8 posted 05-27-2000 11:10 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Krista,

Classical, romantic, lovely...each time I am able to read one of your poems I see such promising poetic growth...you are cooking, my dear!

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


allan
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9 posted 05-27-2000 02:21 PM       View Profile for allan   Email allan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit allan's Home Page   View IP for allan

What everyone else said and then some... Simply lovely. Very well done.  
Janet Marie
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10 posted 05-28-2000 12:13 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

me thinks me needs some K, contacts...
or some K, rose colored glasses..
cause K's eyes see only beauty.
the view thru K's, eyes is DIVINE...
as is this exceptional poem...
you are amazing my friend.
jm

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


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11 posted 05-28-2000 03:25 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Emerald eyes lay closed to light
As a final sigh falls soundless
In yesterday lay earthen dreams
Untouched by silvered bliss.

WOW BEAUTIFUL. sounds like Heaven to me,
stunning poem.




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"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
Douglas Adams.

"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Do not listen to a word I say
Just listen to what I can keep silent"

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Alwye
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12 posted 05-28-2000 10:36 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Coco- Thank you very much!

tracie- I have a thing about lavender....I absolutely adore the color.  Thank you very much!

Mike- Thanks!

Salooma- Thank you too!

Kit- Glad you enjoyed!

Marge- I am honored to have you reply, as always.   I do believe you are right when you say this was written from 'the inkwell' of my heart.  

Ms. deVine- Thank ya much!

Meadowmuse- I'm cooking, eh?  well, thats a good sign I believe!  Maybe someday I'll have as much talent as you!  

allan- Thank you.

JM- This K girl has lavender colored glasses actually...   Thank you so much for your lovely reply, my friend...I am blushing thats for sure.  

brian- Yep, that's what I was going for...this is what my heaven would be like.  Thank you!


 *Krista Knutson*

~Upon pearled wing love's fantasy takes flight~
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13 posted 05-29-2000 06:25 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

hehehhhe.... two in one weekend!  Wonderful.     I bet you can't guess which line was my fav??  well, probably, but I'll tell you anyways...

"Upon a stream of billowing blue I soar among the stars Lavender clouds enrapture me As they whisper from afar."

Yay!

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
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14 posted 05-29-2000 08:42 PM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

You paint a vivid scene interwoven with feeling, Krista!  I wish I had some contact to your muse and a vacation villa in one of the wonderlands you've devised.  Another excellent poem, my dear friend!  

 Abrahm Simons

"Flew too high and burnt the wing
Lost my faith in everything" - Trent Reznor, "Somewhat Damaged"
Alwye
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Thank ya very much Abey and Cassers.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~The darkest midnight is only a prelude to the most enrapturing dawn~

 
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